POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Answered Prayers"When I dabble at things.....
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Comment from Readywriter52
The picture is beautiful and goes well with the poem. I thought the nonet was good. It speaks of faith and hope. Our faith will always reward us.
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The picture is beautiful and goes well with the poem. I thought the nonet was good. It speaks of faith and hope. Our faith will always reward us.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2009
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Readywriter
Thanks so much for the kind review. I am pleased that lyou enjoyed the poem. CArol
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
This poem moves from despair to bright hope using just the few allowed syllables. It uses strong positive characters and concepts -- God - angels - trumpets - love -- to deal positively with the pain of grief. Blessings, Jeanie Mercer
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This poem moves from despair to bright hope using just the few allowed syllables. It uses strong positive characters and concepts -- God - angels - trumpets - love -- to deal positively with the pain of grief. Blessings, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 09-Aug-2009
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Jeanie
Thanks so much for the kind review. This was my first attempt at a nonet and I'm happy that people are enjoying it. Thanks again. Carol
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I'm encouraged to try a nonette myself! - J.
Comment from skye
He can releve the pain, take away our misery, and love us.
What a good choice of both style and art.
You have used the form to create a memorable nonet poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Very well done
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2009
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He can releve the pain, take away our misery, and love us.
What a good choice of both style and art.
You have used the form to create a memorable nonet poem.
Good luck in the contest.
Very well done
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Skye
Thanks for the review and for enjoying the poem. I appreciate it very much. Carol
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
An excellent first nonet, and yes, you did get the rules correct. In addition, the poem flows very nicely, reading like a reverent prayer. Good luck in the contest!
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An excellent first nonet, and yes, you did get the rules correct. In addition, the poem flows very nicely, reading like a reverent prayer. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Steven
Thanks so much for your kind review. I appreciate your comments. Carol
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No problem :)
~ Steven
Comment from fictionwriter
That's the way I hope it will be when my time comes. I hope those I've loved will be there to greet me. I enjoyed this poem very much. Excellent work.
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That's the way I hope it will be when my time comes. I hope those I've loved will be there to greet me. I enjoyed this poem very much. Excellent work.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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fictionwriter
And so do I...family, friends, and loved ones, I hope will all be there and we will be happy together forever. Carol
Comment from KennyRogers
Hi there, Begin Again, and many thanks for posting this moving nonet about answered prayers. The stairway to heaven artwork is most appropriate. Best wishes, Kenny
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Hi there, Begin Again, and many thanks for posting this moving nonet about answered prayers. The stairway to heaven artwork is most appropriate. Best wishes, Kenny
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Kenny Thanks so much for the review. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from Colette
Call it what you will, It is totally beautiful. All I seem to do these days is read
and admire your work, you seem to be going from strength to strength. Congratulations dear friend. Colette
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Call it what you will, It is totally beautiful. All I seem to do these days is read
and admire your work, you seem to be going from strength to strength. Congratulations dear friend. Colette
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Colette
How wonderful for you to say that. I am thrilled that you enjoy my writing. Thanks again Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for educating me on a nonet poem. I'd never heard of them, so of course I had no idea what I was reading accept I liked it. You did a good job, especially after I found out what it was. Good luck with the contest.
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Thank you for educating me on a nonet poem. I'd never heard of them, so of course I had no idea what I was reading accept I liked it. You did a good job, especially after I found out what it was. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Barbara I had never heard of it either till I saw it in the contest list. Guess I'm really getting daring lately. I am so glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from Belinda
Your first attempt proves that you can write a good poem in nonet form, Carol. This poem relates a very painful situation where a person asks for a release, and gets an answer. What kind of release (relief from pain, death), is up to interpretation, I think? Good luck, I admire your creativity.
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Your first attempt proves that you can write a good poem in nonet form, Carol. This poem relates a very painful situation where a person asks for a release, and gets an answer. What kind of release (relief from pain, death), is up to interpretation, I think? Good luck, I admire your creativity.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Belinda Thanks so much. I was so afraid I wasn't going to get this right. It was sort of fun to do. Probably would have been more fun if I wasn't afraid of doing it wrong. Glad you enjoyed it. Carol
Comment from Mastery
Good poem, BA. (sorry forgot your first name...Yikes) What a wonderful way to handle the parting of one partner to join the other..Excellent. Bob
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Good poem, BA. (sorry forgot your first name...Yikes) What a wonderful way to handle the parting of one partner to join the other..Excellent. Bob
Comment Written 08-Aug-2009
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Bob
Thanks so much for the kind review. Glad you enjoyed the poem. My first attempt....scary! Thanks again Carol