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Comment from yachtworknz
Brooke-That was a beutiful mind painting of the forest after a good snow.
Sorry to hear your snowed in, but glad your turning out the poetry while snowed in. What part of the world do you live in?
Cheers
Scott
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Brooke-That was a beutiful mind painting of the forest after a good snow.
Sorry to hear your snowed in, but glad your turning out the poetry while snowed in. What part of the world do you live in?
Cheers
Scott
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Scott, thanks for your lovely review - I live near Philadelphia, PA. By this weekend it will be in the 50's and hopefully all melt and stay away until next winter :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from honeytree
Wonderful words written about "Admission Free." The art work you described here is a gift, that nature gives to us, to enjoy on this earth. The magic within God's creation of all things is really something wonderful.
The shadows on the snow is a special gift God gives to us.
I loved everyword written here.
Honeytree.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Wonderful words written about "Admission Free." The art work you described here is a gift, that nature gives to us, to enjoy on this earth. The magic within God's creation of all things is really something wonderful.
The shadows on the snow is a special gift God gives to us.
I loved everyword written here.
Honeytree.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Annie, thank you for your most thoughtful comments, Brooke
Comment from Reverie
This poem is absolutely fabulous and gorgeous - you have allowed me imagine your view! The complex structure you selected has only enhanced such a beautiful work and your rhyme is impeccable. I am sick of winter myself, but you certainly made it magical again. Great job!
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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This poem is absolutely fabulous and gorgeous - you have allowed me imagine your view! The complex structure you selected has only enhanced such a beautiful work and your rhyme is impeccable. I am sick of winter myself, but you certainly made it magical again. Great job!
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I'm sick of it too, believe me! Thanks so much, Brooke :-)
Comment from Eternal Muse
There are so many beautiful finds on this, Brooke, I lost count. You brought winter back to me, to my drawing room in Las Vegas, where we haven't seen snow for a while. Great imagery, excellent vocabulary, cute and unique rhyming scheme. No suggestions for improvement, looks great. Yes, admission is free to God's gallery (great find).
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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There are so many beautiful finds on this, Brooke, I lost count. You brought winter back to me, to my drawing room in Las Vegas, where we haven't seen snow for a while. Great imagery, excellent vocabulary, cute and unique rhyming scheme. No suggestions for improvement, looks great. Yes, admission is free to God's gallery (great find).
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Yelena, I am so glad you like this poem so much - I truly appreciate your pointing out specific parts. Thank you, Brooke :-)
Comment from JoAnna Lee
I was not pleased with yesterday's snow, either... but agree as to it's beauty. Very apt minute poem of appreciation.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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I was not pleased with yesterday's snow, either... but agree as to it's beauty. Very apt minute poem of appreciation.
Thanks for sharing,
Donna
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Donna, thank you!! Brooke :-)
Comment from glacierbabe
Brooke, this paints the most beautiful picture. Winter beauty can be one of the most inspiring seasons. This is wonderfully written, as usual. :)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Brooke, this paints the most beautiful picture. Winter beauty can be one of the most inspiring seasons. This is wonderfully written, as usual. :)
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Cheryl, I sure hope you appreciate winter beauty or you'd be one depressed person!!! Brooke
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I do love winter and we got 2 feet of snow out of the storm. To help with the dark winters here we use full spectrum light bulbs. Alaska is one of those places you either love or hate. I love it. LOL
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Again you have described what you can see in this picture very well the descriptions are very good another piece I enjoyed regards Fuller
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Again you have described what you can see in this picture very well the descriptions are very good another piece I enjoyed regards Fuller
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Fuller, thank you for your kind review, Brooke :-)
Comment from RADIO
Once again, as with all your creative
poetic thought, it is clear to see
God's grace flowing through your
lines from heart to pen. Another gem.
Radio
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Once again, as with all your creative
poetic thought, it is clear to see
God's grace flowing through your
lines from heart to pen. Another gem.
Radio
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Radio, I appreciate these gracious and warm comments, Brooke :-)
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Beautifully written, my friend. Though I don't miss the cold of living up north, I do sometimes miss a a good snow storm and it's resulting loveliness. You've captured it well. I didn't see anything that needs your attention or correction.
great work - sherry
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Beautifully written, my friend. Though I don't miss the cold of living up north, I do sometimes miss a a good snow storm and it's resulting loveliness. You've captured it well. I didn't see anything that needs your attention or correction.
great work - sherry
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Sherry, if I can move away from the North, I will never ever miss snow, I promise!!! LOL I'm so over it :-) Thanks, Brooke
Comment from Hitcher
Rather you than me friend, way to much snow for my liking but yes I can see the beauty that it can hold, and your words have accentuated it, well done Brooke...Brrrrrr, ha ha.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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Rather you than me friend, way to much snow for my liking but yes I can see the beauty that it can hold, and your words have accentuated it, well done Brooke...Brrrrrr, ha ha.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2009
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2009
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It is far too much snow for me - I'm just trying to make the best of it by looking for the silver lining - I still hate the stuff!!! :-D Thanks, Brooke I don't hate you just because you get to live in the paradise of New Zealand!