Dancing on Air
Nature haiku 35323 total reviews
Comment from LynnRadford
Nice job on the Haiku!
(I myself prefer the short syllabic version. 5-7-5 often seems too long and in my opinion, one is forced to add syllables for the sake of the count.)
I liked the imagery of the tutus floating, before the artwork finished loading. Once it did, I was taken with the whole.
Best of luck to you in the contest!
Sincerely,
LR
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Nice job on the Haiku!
(I myself prefer the short syllabic version. 5-7-5 often seems too long and in my opinion, one is forced to add syllables for the sake of the count.)
I liked the imagery of the tutus floating, before the artwork finished loading. Once it did, I was taken with the whole.
Best of luck to you in the contest!
Sincerely,
LR
Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from CameoRenae
I really liked your haiku poem, but that shape poem that you did "Snow Ballerina" was awesome! I thought the two together were great! Great job!
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I really liked your haiku poem, but that shape poem that you did "Snow Ballerina" was awesome! I thought the two together were great! Great job!
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2009
Comment from rhymer1
A strange and delightful art you play with creating a viual with a visual in poetic words. What a mind's eye you have. Slainte, rhymer1
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A strange and delightful art you play with creating a viual with a visual in poetic words. What a mind's eye you have. Slainte, rhymer1
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2009