When Angels Cry
An old Friend That Needs Everyone's Prayers84 total reviews
Comment from Moira's Amethyst
Short and to the point but very effective in my opinion. I found it rather enjoyable and saw how you managed this with ease. Great work!
Poetry's protege
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
  |
Short and to the point but very effective in my opinion. I found it rather enjoyable and saw how you managed this with ease. Great work!
Poetry's protege
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
thanks again poetry's it was done out of a love for a friend. yours, diana
Comment from Oleander Suicide
The descriptions here remind me of someone I once knew. I love the way you presented this. Artchoice and all a definite recommendation to others. Awesome!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
The descriptions here remind me of someone I once knew. I love the way you presented this. Artchoice and all a definite recommendation to others. Awesome!
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
thanks so much oleander...everytime i see your name i think of tampa...they line their causeways with oleander...yours, diana
Comment from Lady Waukesha
Another powerful emotional piece. There is a genuine poetry to it even though you don't have it listed as a poem. It is touching and I actually kind of teared up as I read it. You tug at the reader's heartstrings with your words. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
Another powerful emotional piece. There is a genuine poetry to it even though you don't have it listed as a poem. It is touching and I actually kind of teared up as I read it. You tug at the reader's heartstrings with your words. Well done.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
thanks so much this is the first time i'm seeing you and so thanks so much for stopping and reading and this poem was done out of love for a friend. yours, diana
Comment from Josipher32
This was a wonderfully written letters and diary nonfictional subject piece. I especially liked the picture choice. Your subject matter is an interesting one. I found no mechanical issues.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
This was a wonderfully written letters and diary nonfictional subject piece. I especially liked the picture choice. Your subject matter is an interesting one. I found no mechanical issues.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
hi josipher...i know you are not an easy grader so coming from you...high praise...thanks so much yours, diana
Comment from Nanny 6
Whoever this letter is for is a very lucky person. The adice you give to follow their own light that it will lead the way gives one the courage to be strong. Great encouragement! Judy
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
Whoever this letter is for is a very lucky person. The adice you give to follow their own light that it will lead the way gives one the courage to be strong. Great encouragement! Judy
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
it is for a wonderful person who is loved and with all of the wonderful words sent in her direction...i have hope she will hear it...yours, diana
Comment from Rainbow Writer
very beautiful, I wonder who it is for... I hope they read it and indeed, come home.
So my joyless friend (,)let me take your hands
Check on the use of ellipses between words.
Good one, Emma
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
very beautiful, I wonder who it is for... I hope they read it and indeed, come home.
So my joyless friend (,)let me take your hands
Check on the use of ellipses between words.
Good one, Emma
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
it is for a beloved friend and i know all of the good energy that is coming out of this in her direction is helping...yours, diana.
Comment from ravenshadowwinds
I have to admit I was emotional wreck when I read that piece, it was as if you were writing to me...the way I was many years ago. Your writing pulled me in and kept me there, well done.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
I have to admit I was emotional wreck when I read that piece, it was as if you were writing to me...the way I was many years ago. Your writing pulled me in and kept me there, well done.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
i knew it was kind of a tear jerker but my friend had just left me in a state that i wanted others to really understand her pain...yours, diana
Comment from mmichelle97219
Althought this was not written about me it struck me so personally. It was like you were talking to me directly. it is perfect.
michelle
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
Althought this was not written about me it struck me so personally. It was like you were talking to me directly. it is perfect.
michelle
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
hi mm...well i wish this for anyone that i care about and that would be you as well...so i want to see you and my friend thrive and be happy. yours, diana
Comment from azbukivedi
This is almost a poem in the prose form (and I bet I am not the first one to say it, but I haven't read the reviews yet).
It's beautiful and urgent, and is like an essay-formed letter. I liked it.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
This is almost a poem in the prose form (and I bet I am not the first one to say it, but I haven't read the reviews yet).
It's beautiful and urgent, and is like an essay-formed letter. I liked it.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
thanks so much again...you might be right but it is an open letter to a very sad friend...sent with love and conviction
Comment from Burtan
If this is about someone dear to you I hope your beautiful words and blessings find them and help them find the way. This is a beautiful write.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
|
If this is about someone dear to you I hope your beautiful words and blessings find them and help them find the way. This is a beautiful write.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2008
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2008
-
i do to i think we all reach a time when we ebb very low and we feel that we are alone and i wanted her to know she is never alone...yours, diana
