Wonder of Birds - Napowrimo
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "What Makes You a Bird?"Napowrimo 2025 about birds
33 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
I can see this will be a vey informative month as you offer poetry about birds, and give added notes. This is a lovely introduction - and I have to say I have never thought previously about birds' similarity with and difference from humans.
Well done!
Wendy
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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I can see this will be a vey informative month as you offer poetry about birds, and give added notes. This is a lovely introduction - and I have to say I have never thought previously about birds' similarity with and difference from humans.
Well done!
Wendy
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 04-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Wendy! I hope I can keep it up!
Hugs!
Comment from Teri7
Helen, This is a very well written Kyrielle Sonnet about birds. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. I love to read about birds and look at pictures of them. They are so amazing! love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Helen, This is a very well written Kyrielle Sonnet about birds. You used great descriptive words and very good imagery from the artwork you chose. I love to read about birds and look at pictures of them. They are so amazing! love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 02-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Teri! I like birds, too! Hugs!
Comment from Jasmine Girl
Now I know it will take longer for you to write a poem because you do research. I have learned so much from your poem and the lovely art piece. I've also learnt that birdies and human have two things in common. We all have backbones and we are warm-blooded.
Excellent.
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Now I know it will take longer for you to write a poem because you do research. I have learned so much from your poem and the lovely art piece. I've also learnt that birdies and human have two things in common. We all have backbones and we are warm-blooded.
Excellent.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Lisa! Appreciate the super review and generous stars. My Fanstory experience has revealed to me that my muse is a nonfiction writer. Lol.
Hugs!
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You are very good at writing funny science fictions and scripts.
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Thank you!
Comment from judiverse
Great idea for the National Poetry Month contest. It will keep you busy, and you won't lack for subjects. I like the strategy of asking questions. You note some similarities between birds and humans. Great use of repeating lines. However, you have a grammar problem in "that's just like me. I know it would throw your meter off to use that're. The rest of the poem isn't in colloquial style. Best wishes for your writing for the contest. It is a challenge. judi
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Great idea for the National Poetry Month contest. It will keep you busy, and you won't lack for subjects. I like the strategy of asking questions. You note some similarities between birds and humans. Great use of repeating lines. However, you have a grammar problem in "that's just like me. I know it would throw your meter off to use that're. The rest of the poem isn't in colloquial style. Best wishes for your writing for the contest. It is a challenge. judi
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you for your thoughtful review, Judi! Appreciate the suggestion and will think how to revise it!
Hugs!
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You're very welcome. The obvious choice would screw up your meter. judi
Comment from kahpot
I have never thought about this, though I think that some of our ideas for
planes came from studying the flight of birds, a very interesting read, very well written****kahpot
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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I have never thought about this, though I think that some of our ideas for
planes came from studying the flight of birds, a very interesting read, very well written****kahpot
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Yes, we have learned so much from nature! Thanks so much, Kahpot! Hugs!
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Helen,
This is a beautiful poem. I like that you are exploring birds and comparing them humans. Who would think we are alike even though we are different.
Well done
Cecilia
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Helen,
This is a beautiful poem. I like that you are exploring birds and comparing them humans. Who would think we are alike even though we are different.
Well done
Cecilia
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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And the bird species are all so different, it's amazing that they are all birds! Hugs!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Loved this part, as I found lots of facts that I didn't know about the birds, pardon my ignoranceL:) "You have a backbone - so have I
You all have wings but some can't fly
With beaks for food on land or sea
Could you have traits that's found in me?
Why are all birdies called the same?
Could you have traits that's found in me?"
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Loved this part, as I found lots of facts that I didn't know about the birds, pardon my ignoranceL:) "You have a backbone - so have I
You all have wings but some can't fly
With beaks for food on land or sea
Could you have traits that's found in me?
Why are all birdies called the same?
Could you have traits that's found in me?"
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Iza!
Hugs!
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent kyrielle. I guess I knew we are a lot like birds but I just thought perhaps in different ways. Rhetorical perhaps.
A most entertaining poem for the NaPo. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Excellent kyrielle. I guess I knew we are a lot like birds but I just thought perhaps in different ways. Rhetorical perhaps.
A most entertaining poem for the NaPo. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 01-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Gloria! I know I'll have fun learning some obscure factoids about these amazing animals.
Hugs!
Comment from June Sargent
I would like to believe I have something in common with these graceful creatures. I have dreams about flying free. I do know they have been linked to dinosaurs. I probably have the grace of a dinosaur. Lol
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I would like to believe I have something in common with these graceful creatures. I have dreams about flying free. I do know they have been linked to dinosaurs. I probably have the grace of a dinosaur. Lol
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Well, birds are like dinosaurs and ducks are very awkward flyers. But I think we will fly in Heaven ! Thanks so much, June! Hugs!
Comment from Carol Clark2
I love the visuals you included, especially the bottom one. It really points out the similarity of bone structure between birds and humans. I like your Kyrielle Sonnet; you used good rhymes, and the repeated question is good. One poem done, good job!
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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I love the visuals you included, especially the bottom one. It really points out the similarity of bone structure between birds and humans. I like your Kyrielle Sonnet; you used good rhymes, and the repeated question is good. One poem done, good job!
Comment Written 01-Apr-2025
reply by the author on 02-Apr-2025
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Thank you so much, Carol! I need your cheering! Hugs!
