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New Beginnings

When two lost souls come together

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Comment from karenina
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Harrumph! I'm surprised Mrs. Hendricks answered the door...she should have been busy counting the lumps of coal in her stocking or taking a ride around the town square on her broom--the witch!

Okay--so I have no Christmas spirit for her, but Leland and Mary Ann? Now there's a match made in heaven!

I smiled as he broke his cookie in half and shared with his soon to be mom.

Let's all have more of this kind of behavior in 2025!

A warm and cozy story that gave me the "feel goods"

Karenina

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Leland had a heart of gold buried deep inside him and he deserved to find a woman like Mary to love him. Thanks for the review.
    Smiles, Carol
reply by karenina on 03-Jan-2025
    :)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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This story warmed my heart. I wish there were more Mary Ann's in the world. Wonderful job of writing. Thank you for touching my heart.

"Leland," Mrs. Hendricks said with a sigh, "this is Mrs. Lacey. She's here to see you." (This)

Mary Ann smiled, her voice warm and steady. "That's okay. I don't ne (stready,)

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 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024

Comment from patcelaw
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This is a very beautiful and touching story and it brought A smile to my face as I was reading it you see I gave up a son for adoption, and the people who came to see him first decided that they could not take him because he was too large. So the next people that got a chance to take him were the ones who adopted him and gave him a wonderful home. Thank you for sharing. Such a lovely story on this ending of the year. Patricia.

 Comment Written 27-Dec-2024


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2025
    Awesome as always. I know I thanked you in the PM but I wanted to make sure I said thanks again. It's awesome.
    Smiles, Carol