Comment from Laurie Holding

Excellent

Stunning artwork you chose to accompany this piece! And yes, it's incredible to me that instead of waking up to our earth's plight, we're actually moving in the opposite direction. Crazy and very sad times.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind words about the artwork. It is indeed concerning to see the challenges our planet faces and the direction things are taking. It's important for all of us to stay informed and take action, even in small ways, to contribute to a more sustainable future. Every little effort counts in making a positive impact.

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Your haiku describes the state of earth's balance succinctly and with a somber message for its inhabitants But, despite our best/worst efforts to destroy the earth, God is still in control.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your thoughtful reflection. It's true that while we face significant challenges, there is hope and resilience in the natural world and in the efforts of individuals and communities working towards positive change. Believing that there is a greater force or plan can provide comfort and motivation to continue striving for a better future.

Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Peter,
This is a lovely poem about the current state of the Earth.
Will we ever learn to gently and lovingly treat our planet (our physical sustainer)?
Great words.
Peter,
Good luck.
Blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Hi Cindy
Thank you for your kind review.
Bless you.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

How true your words are. I feel sorry for my kids and grandkids. Love tge picture. Good luck in the contest. I like the words you used.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Many thanks and blessings to you Brenda

Comment from Nicki.B

Excellent

Yes it's is sadly Peter and you have captured this catastrophic situation in a beautiful poem. Carefully chosen words and great image to compliment, with stunning colours.
Good luck with the 5-7-5 contest.
Best Wishes
Nicki

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind words and encouragement. I'm glad to hear that the poem resonated with you and captured the essence of the situation. Your support and feedback are greatly appreciated. Best wishes to you as well!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

I'm sure your haiku says it all very succinctly and pricks our conscience for the harm we do and the "precious harmony" we disrupt through selfish and money-oriented obsessions. Nicely done, Peter, in compliance with the format. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you, Debbie, for your thoughtful feedback and for recognizing the message within the haiku. It's heartening to know that it resonates and prompts reflection on the impact of our actions. I appreciate your kind words and support. Best wishes to you as well!

Comment from Trina Layne

Excellent

Your words are very true. You have expressed your message quite clearly in these few lines. It is always good to bring awareness to the plight of Mother Nature. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your thoughtful response and for appreciating the message. It's important to continue raising awareness about the challenges facing Mother Nature, and I'm glad the words resonated with you. Your support in spreading this awareness is invaluable.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

As God is greater than any and all of his creations, the day is coming, and fear not, it will come, when all will be set aright.
At the end of Revelation 11:18 the phrase "and for destroying the destroyers of the earth". This phrase talks about not only polluters, but also about the destruction of those pushing hate, greed, and unchecked violence.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Hi my friend
Your reflection on the message from Revelation 11:18 highlights the hope and justice that many find in this passage. It speaks to the promise of setting things right and addressing the harms caused by pollution, hate, greed, and violence. This perspective can offer comfort and motivation to work towards a more harmonious and just world. Thank you for sharing this meaningful interpretation.
Stay safe and well.

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem contest. We have the richest man in America all hyped up about colonizing in space while one political party tries to end all safe-guards we have for our own environment. We will cause our own demise. Lovely poem. if only people would read it and understand.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your thoughtful comments and for appreciating the poem. It's indeed concerning when priorities seem to shift away from protecting our own planet. The poem aims to highlight these issues and encourage reflection and action. Your feedback reinforces the importance of spreading awareness and understanding. Let's hope more people take the message to heart and work towards safeguarding our environment.
Look at the number of conflicts raging around the world.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

A very well written 575 for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. It is a shame when man has so much and yet they do so much to destroy this ecosystem of this planet. May you have a wonderful Christmas and may God bless you. Patricia.

 Comment Written 18-Dec-2024

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reply by the author on 18-Dec-2024

Thank you for your kind words and thoughtful wishes, Patricia! 🌟 Your message beautifully captures the bittersweet reality of our world. It's true, we have so much potential to cherish and protect our planet, yet often fall short. Wishing you a wonderful Christmas filled with joy and peace. May you be blessed abundantly.