Tattered Vision
For the cloth can never be whole . . .32 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I agree here Yvette, our flash memories of the past can light up our present and I enjoyed your well chosen words to bring a bright spark into my day here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I agree here Yvette, our flash memories of the past can light up our present and I enjoyed your well chosen words to bring a bright spark into my day here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for your review on this shortie, my lady... always glad to pass along a smile!! ;) :) And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Yvette,
This is a well written and illustrated poem. The poem and your notes tell a strange truth about how memories seems to work.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hi Yvette,
This is a well written and illustrated poem. The poem and your notes tell a strange truth about how memories seems to work.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Merry Christmas.
Joan
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Joan, and I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
Comment from royowen
I love the idea of sharp shards piercing and pinning memories to the notice board of life, those shattered pieces can't possibly be put back together I feel, beautifully written dear Yvette, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I love the idea of sharp shards piercing and pinning memories to the notice board of life, those shattered pieces can't possibly be put back together I feel, beautifully written dear Yvette, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for 'getting' this one, Sir Roy... in reading you comments, I think as we get a bit into 'older years', this one takes on some real meaning, yeah? :) :) And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
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Not a problem Yvette
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
It seems crazy blonde's are smart thinkers.
A short, targeted and on the mark 242 poem.
It's such a shame with age we also seem to forget to remember.
Cleverly written, precise and a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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It seems crazy blonde's are smart thinkers.
A short, targeted and on the mark 242 poem.
It's such a shame with age we also seem to forget to remember.
Cleverly written, precise and a pleasure to read.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 12-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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LOL -- we have our moments, yeah? :-) Thanx so much for stopping in for a review on this one, Shirley... And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
Comment from judiverse
Beautiful presentation. The artwork and your words come together perfectly. It is strange how we remember some things so vividly and others totally disappear. I like the use of time's veil. Best of luck in the contest. I may be looking at a winner here. judi
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Beautiful presentation. The artwork and your words come together perfectly. It is strange how we remember some things so vividly and others totally disappear. I like the use of time's veil. Best of luck in the contest. I may be looking at a winner here. judi
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Wow!! What an awesome review and thank you, thank you for those awesome stars, Lady Judy!! ;) I'll keep my fingers crossed on the latter, but I won't hold my breath (lol!!) :-) Glad you enjoyed! ;) And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
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You're very welcome. I do most of my shopping online now. So many of our department stores have gone out of business. I thought I was having trouble with my computer and couldn't do anything on it all day yesterday. Someone figured out it was b because I hadn't been doing the updates. I did them, and it's been working fine today. judi
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
Hey Yvette.
Even people not looking for metaphorical meaning of a poem we'll get slapped right across the face with this one. The meaning is very clear and is superbly stated. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Z
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Hey Yvette.
Even people not looking for metaphorical meaning of a poem we'll get slapped right across the face with this one. The meaning is very clear and is superbly stated. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Z
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Wow -- thanx for such an awesome review, Z - always good to give ya a good slap now and again (wink, wink)! And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
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You are very welcome, Yvette.
:>))) Z
Comment from lyenochka
You have used stunning metaphors in this tiny poetic form, Yvette! Loved the "shards" of memories and "time's veil". The past keeps getting obscured by the veil of time and sometimes by the rewriting of history by memory. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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You have used stunning metaphors in this tiny poetic form, Yvette! Loved the "shards" of memories and "time's veil". The past keeps getting obscured by the veil of time and sometimes by the rewriting of history by memory. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Oh, I'm so glad you liked it, my lady -- your review made me smile since you got me! :-) And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
Comment from DonandVicki
I agree with you, Yvette, we find ourselves in dark places and yet when we count our blessings and bring up good memories, we can pull ourselves out of a slump.
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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I agree with you, Yvette, we find ourselves in dark places and yet when we count our blessings and bring up good memories, we can pull ourselves out of a slump.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, sir! And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
Comment from Cecilia A Heiskary
Yvette,
This is an amazing 2-4-2 poem. The three lines are very powerful and speak volumes. It's amazing the way words are presented that give them the power or not.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Yvette,
This is an amazing 2-4-2 poem. The three lines are very powerful and speak volumes. It's amazing the way words are presented that give them the power or not.
Well done my friend
Cecilia
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thank you, thank you, my lady, for these wonderful stars -- you've made my long day a bit brighter!! ;) And I apologize for the delay, but with the hours at the store (crazy time of year!!) and getting ready for Christmas, I've been away from the computer longer than usual! ;-) :-) You take care out there and Merry Christmas! ;) Yvette
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Yvette,
I'm glad I made your day. Stay strong through the holidays. It will be over soon.
Talk to you later
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
Nicely penned 2-4-2 poem.
I prefer the brighter side of your image(ry). You are not THAT crazy. LOL
Your last line is a real gem!
IMHO this entry will garner you votes in the contest.
Mark
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Yvette,
Nicely penned 2-4-2 poem.
I prefer the brighter side of your image(ry). You are not THAT crazy. LOL
Your last line is a real gem!
IMHO this entry will garner you votes in the contest.
Mark
Comment Written 11-Dec-2024
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2024
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Thanx so much for stopping in on this one, Mark -- always great to here from you over here, sir! Thanx for the vote of confidence... gonna just cross my fingers, I guess!! ;) :) Take care and Merry Christmas!! Yvette ;)
