I Still Love You More
To Kenzie Jo, my granddaughter ~ in monorhyme51 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
AWWW!! You and Kenzie have such a beautiful relationship. It's clear that you two love each other so much! You have been pouring love into her heart from the start of her life and are her biggest fan. I can see such joy and confidence and security in her face sitting on you!!
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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AWWW!! You and Kenzie have such a beautiful relationship. It's clear that you two love each other so much! You have been pouring love into her heart from the start of her life and are her biggest fan. I can see such joy and confidence and security in her face sitting on you!!
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Thanks so very much, Helen. I was so happy to see that you also heard from James today. I happen to notice his reviews cause I was wondering it he had gotten to see John today too.
I appreciate your very sweet comments for my poem for Kenzie. Yes, she was actually here more that at her own home when she was growing up. I did day care for Michelle so that she didn't have to worry about her so much. Back then there were a lot of crap going on at daycares. So I was glad to help out. I even threw a little birthday party for her every year so I did get the glory days with her. Thanks again for all the kindest words for us both. Yes,, she felt comfortable with me anywhere. Thanks again my dear friend..and sis. Much love and hugs!! Debi
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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
What a lovely poem for Kenzie Jo. Is she the one who does your lovely drawings? She is quite an artist. If she hasn't a job, she should apply to one of the greeting card companies. They will love her drawings.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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What a lovely poem for Kenzie Jo. Is she the one who does your lovely drawings? She is quite an artist. If she hasn't a job, she should apply to one of the greeting card companies. They will love her drawings.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Carol, yes, Kenzie does my drawings sometimes. She is studying and in an internship to be a tattoo artist.
What a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
Lovely, sentimental poem for Kenzie. Sons and daughters are precious. They become our staff in life as we age. There is no love like a daughter's love. Getting to a stage, more like sisters. And when we are low, their love does grow. In later life, the mother becomes the daughter and Kenzie will become your Mom. Love, Kace. xx
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Lovely, sentimental poem for Kenzie. Sons and daughters are precious. They become our staff in life as we age. There is no love like a daughter's love. Getting to a stage, more like sisters. And when we are low, their love does grow. In later life, the mother becomes the daughter and Kenzie will become your Mom. Love, Kace. xx
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Awe, Kace, what a beautiful review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are. I did daycare for her so she was with me all the time. It was like I raised her so she and I have remained very close. Thanks for all the kind words and for the six stars. Her mom is my daughter and actually when you talked about some day the daughter becomes the mom, well that is already happened.. LOL..at least it seems to be that way as she tried to tell me things all the time that I used to tell her. LOL... thanks again, dear friend. Love you, sweetie!! Debi
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Debi,
yes, I know, it's been a moment! Sorry 'bout that!
But what a beautiful way and time to come back and discover 'love' in its most purest form. Oh how I would have loved to be adored as you have displayed with you and your lovely-talented granddaughter, Kenzie. But that is not in my, nor Jade's blueprint... so it's living vicariously through my beautiful friends and family to feel and experience these feelings. Thank you for this installment!
Beautiful poem, magic backstory and as always, rhyming that flows like liquid honey.
With our thoughts we create...
the growing of love.
Kindest regards,
James.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Hi Debi,
yes, I know, it's been a moment! Sorry 'bout that!
But what a beautiful way and time to come back and discover 'love' in its most purest form. Oh how I would have loved to be adored as you have displayed with you and your lovely-talented granddaughter, Kenzie. But that is not in my, nor Jade's blueprint... so it's living vicariously through my beautiful friends and family to feel and experience these feelings. Thank you for this installment!
Beautiful poem, magic backstory and as always, rhyming that flows like liquid honey.
With our thoughts we create...
the growing of love.
Kindest regards,
James.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Oooh James, is it really you? I am so so so happy to see you. Did you find my pm I wrote to you quite a while ago. I was so worried that I wrote to you to see if you were ok. I missed you something fierce too. So what a delightful surprise this is. And you are my newest Thanksgiving thing to be thankful for.
I pray you are staying around for a while and I bet John, our mutual like brother was thrilled to see you back too. You two are so much a little, he just graced me with a six for my poem too. And speaking of, thank you for the lovely comments you made about it and for the six lovely stars for this poem.
Thanks again and if by chance you do sneak out again, please say good bye before you leave it you think of it. We missed you a lot, my awesome friend. So much love, Debi
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No I did not get your pm Debi, so sorry for the abrupt departure... didn't know it at the time. Life got busy, complicated and ended up rather painful. I haven't really come out the other side as yet, but as I try to maintain and slide back into at very least, reviewing slowly at first, I hope to fill you in on the blanks. Even though I wasn't around, the special people in my life remain firmly in my healing, prayers and thoughts on a daily basis. That is the one constant that keeps me on the right side of grace... the connection I consciously foster. So I do feel as though I speak to you, and others, every day on a personal level. So, so sorry for not letting you know what was going on with me. I guess I may have pushed the envelope a tad too far and paid for it. Hope your Thanksgiving went well. We don't celebrate it here in OZ, but we should... no matter I'm thankful all of the time. Missed your smiley face though. Read you soon!
Love and respect dear Debi.
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Oh James, I didn't mean it that way. I just meant that I missed you and wanted you to know that others feel that way about you. You are loved here and you make a difference to us. So that is all I was saying. I didn't or never want you to feel you owe us to say goodbye but want you to know that whatever is going on in your life may be going on in someone's life that might already mean the world to you here. He is like a brother to you and something is bothering him that he only can hint at, but maybe you can help him and maybe he can help you. (Although I hope you know I am ALWAYS here for you)
I worry about both my awesome brothers here.
Much love to you and your lovely wife, Jade!!
Comment from GWHARGIS
Awe. This was so darned sweet. My MIL used to whisper in my children's ears "who loves you the most". She said it right before she passed. Some traditions and words will stay with you long after the other person is gone. Beautiful. Gretchen
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Awe. This was so darned sweet. My MIL used to whisper in my children's ears "who loves you the most". She said it right before she passed. Some traditions and words will stay with you long after the other person is gone. Beautiful. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Gretchen, what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
This monorhyme was so much fun to read. I enjoy reading about happy things and happy times. You and Kenzie (and all your grandkids) have such a beautiful relationship. They are all a blessing. This poem makes me smile.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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This monorhyme was so much fun to read. I enjoy reading about happy things and happy times. You and Kenzie (and all your grandkids) have such a beautiful relationship. They are all a blessing. This poem makes me smile.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Lorraine, what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. She said to say hi to you. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are delightful to read, are descriptive and creative. I found the poem showing the closeness with a granddaughter that both of you will never forget. The poem flows and connects well. The are work is awesome and compliments these words. Hi Debi, great poem - hope you and your family had a great Thanksgiving! Hugs, Maria
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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The author's words are delightful to read, are descriptive and creative. I found the poem showing the closeness with a granddaughter that both of you will never forget. The poem flows and connects well. The are work is awesome and compliments these words. Hi Debi, great poem - hope you and your family had a great Thanksgiving! Hugs, Maria
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi Maria, and what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from royowen
Rebecca, (my elder child) and her mum play that game, Elaine says 'love you', and Rebecca says, 'love you more' a beautiful competition, both my daughters are smashing mums, and so I have seen your godly love for relative strangers, it's the same as Elaine's so I've got a head start in recognising it, love is worth more than the entire beauty and worth of this beautiful universe we live in, imagine eternity living also with Himself? Beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Rebecca, (my elder child) and her mum play that game, Elaine says 'love you', and Rebecca says, 'love you more' a beautiful competition, both my daughters are smashing mums, and so I have seen your godly love for relative strangers, it's the same as Elaine's so I've got a head start in recognising it, love is worth more than the entire beauty and worth of this beautiful universe we live in, imagine eternity living also with Himself? Beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2024
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Oooh Roy, the biggest compliments I have ever received from you are when you put me in the same realm of occupancy as Elaine. It is like the kindest and sweetest thing you could ever say. I know what a loving mom and wife she is so I thank you from the bottom of my heart for the best thing you could ever say to me. God bless you, my friend. Thank you again!! Loving grandkids and family is what I do best!! And of course my friends here!
Love, Debi
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You are lovely Debi
Comment from ESOSTINE
How challenging to write such a long monorhyme, ensuring that the rhyme scheme is maintained. Your poem was a vivid expression of a lovely relationship between you and your grandchild, Kenzie. It is a privilege to be at this level of life. I thank for you, dear friend Debie. Well enjoyed. Remain blessed.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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How challenging to write such a long monorhyme, ensuring that the rhyme scheme is maintained. Your poem was a vivid expression of a lovely relationship between you and your grandchild, Kenzie. It is a privilege to be at this level of life. I thank for you, dear friend Debie. Well enjoyed. Remain blessed.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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My dear Esostine, you are always so sweet. And what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi
Comment from estory
Your poem celebrates the special relationship between mothers and daughters and grandmothers and granddaughters. You have a simple, clear message in a simple, clear form and warm language. estory
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Your poem celebrates the special relationship between mothers and daughters and grandmothers and granddaughters. You have a simple, clear message in a simple, clear form and warm language. estory
Comment Written 29-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2024
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Hi estory, and what a lovely review for my granddaughter, Kenzie and me. I love all of my grandkids but Kenzie is the oldest and we have spent more time together than any others so she is special. As they all are.
Thanks too for the very kind words for my poem. I appreciate you so very much, my dear friend. Love, Debi