Abodes
Home is where the heart is - is true.35 total reviews
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
I guess even ghosts go back to their favorite home to live out their life ... um, their afterlife. With coffee:-)
I don't read a lot of poetry, but your picture drew me in. The words of your poem are so true - when I walk into someone's home for the first time, I always look around to see what kind of person they really are.
I think this is a lovely entry for the contest. Good luck!
xo
Pam
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I guess even ghosts go back to their favorite home to live out their life ... um, their afterlife. With coffee:-)
I don't read a lot of poetry, but your picture drew me in. The words of your poem are so true - when I walk into someone's home for the first time, I always look around to see what kind of person they really are.
I think this is a lovely entry for the contest. Good luck!
xo
Pam
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Sanku
I love the picture of the smug casper with his cup of hot tea(or coffee) and enjoying the warmth from an ancient fireplace.
I love to look around a house and see what I can deduce about its inhabitants...All the best for the contest
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I love the picture of the smug casper with his cup of hot tea(or coffee) and enjoying the warmth from an ancient fireplace.
I love to look around a house and see what I can deduce about its inhabitants...All the best for the contest
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Aussie
Loved the illustration. Must have been a old deserted home taken over by the ghosts of time. Some say we leave a footprint in a home well loved when we move on. Different, entertaining and well presented. K xx
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Loved the illustration. Must have been a old deserted home taken over by the ghosts of time. Some say we leave a footprint in a home well loved when we move on. Different, entertaining and well presented. K xx
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Hi Aussie,
Thank you for your sweet thoughts and gracious review!
Senyai
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. This is so true. I find it so interesting to go into people's homes and get a sense of who they are by the things they collect and have around the home. I like the presentation of your poem as well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poetry Contest. This is so true. I find it so interesting to go into people's homes and get a sense of who they are by the things they collect and have around the home. I like the presentation of your poem as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Hi Marilyn,
Thank you for such interesting thoughts. I feel as you do, a home really does tell a real story of it inhabitants :-)
Thanks for the well wishes too,
Senyai
Comment from royowen
I just love the artwork with the Casper look alike sitting there looking most comfortably in a sort of Dickensian setting, I think you've done a great job with this 5/7/5 poetry contest, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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I just love the artwork with the Casper look alike sitting there looking most comfortably in a sort of Dickensian setting, I think you've done a great job with this 5/7/5 poetry contest, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Hi Roy,
Thank you, sir! I appreciate such an excellent review :-)
Senyai
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Most welcome
Comment from Katiemae1977
Thisbis so true. What we adorn our homes with says a lot about us. Your photo is rather humorous. Makes me want to stay away from antiques LOL.
Good job and a great entry in the 5-7-5 contest. Good luck!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
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Thisbis so true. What we adorn our homes with says a lot about us. Your photo is rather humorous. Makes me want to stay away from antiques LOL.
Good job and a great entry in the 5-7-5 contest. Good luck!
Luv&stuff
Katiemae1977
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is so true. I think you can make a home anywhere, the same as many people never make a home, they only ever have a house. I've known people like that. A lovely 5-7-5 poem, senyai.
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This is so true. I think you can make a home anywhere, the same as many people never make a home, they only ever have a house. I've known people like that. A lovely 5-7-5 poem, senyai.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from June Sargent
A house can be full of stuff and still feel empty. But a house with barely any stuff can feel warm and inviting - because of the love shared in it. That's a home with heart.
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A house can be full of stuff and still feel empty. But a house with barely any stuff can feel warm and inviting - because of the love shared in it. That's a home with heart.
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
That's a good one. Interestingly enough, it is more than a truism. People make themselves at home when they are comfortable. Comfort is different for most people. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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That's a good one. Interestingly enough, it is more than a truism. People make themselves at home when they are comfortable. Comfort is different for most people. Good luck in the contest.
Robert
Comment Written 22-Nov-2024
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2024
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Hi Robert,
Your thoughts are so true! Thanks for an excellent review of my tiny poem :-)
Senyai
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count, form, and composition. The presentation and imagery is beautiful. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poetry Contest. Good syllables count, form, and composition. The presentation and imagery is beautiful. Well done!
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment Written 21-Nov-2024