Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so romantic and moving Katiemae as everything changed for you with this first kiss and I loved your dramatic words to mark this occasion, a wonderful poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Dolly!

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork and presentation, Katiemae.
-You have written good poems with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and occasional rhyme.
-A very good opening verse.
-The second verse expands on the first
showing the deep love you see in this person.
-A very good closing verse.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Pam!

reply by Pam (respa) on 07-Nov-2024

You are very welcome, Katiemae.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

How cute is this? I think there are quite a few life long, and I hope eternal relationships have been sealed this way, they are amazing, I think I was always a romantic, created in my youth, beautifully written KatieMae, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Roy!

reply by royowen on 07-Nov-2024

My pleasure

Comment from Sally Law

Excellent

Dear Katiemae,
Like me, you're in a romantic mood. I meet my husband-to-be when I was 12; so I can relate to this one. Just precious in the unique form.
Sending you my best today as always, and my best wishes for the 3-6-9 poetry contest.
Sal Xoxo's

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

12? That's interesting Sally. Thanks so very much for reviewing!

reply by Sally Law on 07-Nov-2024

Met him, not fall in love with him. But we were young when we fell in love. Blessings, dear.
Sal :))

Comment from Robert Zimmerman

Excellent

Hello Katiemae.
First let me say, your poem meets the style standard to a T. More so, the message is an innocent and endearing one. Every reader can fix his or her eyes upon this poem and smile. The last line of the last stanza is a great one.
Robert

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for your lovely comments and revi!ew Robert

reply by Robert Zimmerman on 07-Nov-2024

You're very welcome.

Comment from Brenda Strauser

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your poem. It was so cute. The picture is a good choice for the poem. I like the last line. It brings back.memories of my own first kiss. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Brenda!

Comment from Tim Margetts

Excellent

This is so cute and matches so well with the picture above it.
I love the way you capture that moment in time, the perfect first, that can never be repeated.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest :)

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 07-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing!

Comment from Jessica Wheeler

Excellent

I just love that last line!! A beautiful, heartfelt poem, with great use of the form's constraints. I find this particular form to be a bit difficult, but this was great.
Thank you for sharing!
Xo
Jess

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Jessica for your lovely comments and review!

Comment from Jacob1395

Excellent

I could really feel the love in this piece and the spark of energy between these two people. I thought you captured this really well in your writing. I really enjoyed reading it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much Jacob for your review and good luck wishes!

Comment from Natureschild

Excellent

This is a beautiful short poem, delivered in so few syllables. A perfect moment when a spark of energy makes the planets align for someone and everything seems perfect.

 Comment Written 06-Nov-2024

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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2024

Thanks so very much for reviewing!