Detour
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Barbara Wilkey's version."Two very real women in not so real situation.
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I think you did very well. It does come across that you are very shy, lol but soon you will forget thit this as the crowd of Fanstorians will take you in. Great write. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Hi Barbara, I think you did very well. It does come across that you are very shy, lol but soon you will forget thit this as the crowd of Fanstorians will take you in. Great write. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the understanding.
Comment from jim vecchio
Glad you wrote this. There were a few misspellings, but I don't think many will notice. It's good to have a site like this where we can have fun with one another nd not lose our tempers. I'm glad I arrived after the stripper. I told my wife I'd behave.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Glad you wrote this. There were a few misspellings, but I don't think many will notice. It's good to have a site like this where we can have fun with one another nd not lose our tempers. I'm glad I arrived after the stripper. I told my wife I'd behave.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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LOL Thank you for the kind review. I had fun with it, but my worst fear is I forgot somebody and their feelings will be hurt.
Comment from Jacob1395
I could definitely picture the scene as I was reading, Barbara and thank you for the mention, I was probably still recovering after singing on stage. I really enjoyed reading it, it's another brilliant addition to this book.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I could definitely picture the scene as I was reading, Barbara and thank you for the mention, I was probably still recovering after singing on stage. I really enjoyed reading it, it's another brilliant addition to this book.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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You're special to me. I had to mention you. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
Nice post, Barb. Christine said I was there, but I don't remember a thing. I think she was pulling my leg. Wendy didn't see me, so I guess Christine was pulling a fast one.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Nice post, Barb. Christine said I was there, but I don't remember a thing. I think she was pulling my leg. Wendy didn't see me, so I guess Christine was pulling a fast one.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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No, I'm sure you were there. You were probably like me and hiding in the background. My worst fear is that I'd forget one of my friends and I see that I did. I'm so very sorry. I am going back and adding you to my post.
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No apologies needed.
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That was my biggest fear. I have now added you. I am truly sorry.
Comment from GWHARGIS
The longhorn steering gag was funny. Sounded a tad painful but still funny. You didn't leave out many. And regardless of a food fight, I'm introverted enough to hide under the table. Lol. Great addition. Makes me so happy a bunch of yall are running with this. Gretchen
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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The longhorn steering gag was funny. Sounded a tad painful but still funny. You didn't leave out many. And regardless of a food fight, I'm introverted enough to hide under the table. Lol. Great addition. Makes me so happy a bunch of yall are running with this. Gretchen
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Thank you for this kind review. My biggest fear is I might have left a friend out and will hurt their feelings.
Comment from Begin Again
Wouldn't it be marvelous and exciting to meet all our friends? I'm not one to be on a stage talking, but one-on-one, I'm good. And yes, I believe Garth will be in the next book, too. I enjoyed seeing all the people in your story, and I, too, would have loved to meet Sunny and Harley if they'd been there. I could have taken a long walk with them.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wouldn't it be marvelous and exciting to meet all our friends? I'm not one to be on a stage talking, but one-on-one, I'm good. And yes, I believe Garth will be in the next book, too. I enjoyed seeing all the people in your story, and I, too, would have loved to meet Sunny and Harley if they'd been there. I could have taken a long walk with them.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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We sure could have that walk. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from judiverse
You had some great details and brought in some extra guests. I'm glad they were able to make the trip. And Roy came all the way from Australia and Dolly from England, and for what--a food fight? It turned out to be quite an event. It seems like the occasion has turned out to be a big deal, with so many writing their version. It was great to imagine such a convention. I think it would be a great idea to actually have one, although I probably couldn't attend. judi
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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You had some great details and brought in some extra guests. I'm glad they were able to make the trip. And Roy came all the way from Australia and Dolly from England, and for what--a food fight? It turned out to be quite an event. It seems like the occasion has turned out to be a big deal, with so many writing their version. It was great to imagine such a convention. I think it would be a great idea to actually have one, although I probably couldn't attend. judi
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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It would be great if we could all be there. I would love to actually meet my FanStory family, but I would want to do it in a small group. I don't do large functions.
Comment from nomi338
Wow! That was some party. Today I have a slight hangover from all the libations I imbibed. I think maybe next time I will exercise a little more discretion, not drinking so much. It is just that I so enjoyed meeting everyone in person. Let's jus say I was overwhelmed.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wow! That was some party. Today I have a slight hangover from all the libations I imbibed. I think maybe next time I will exercise a little more discretion, not drinking so much. It is just that I so enjoyed meeting everyone in person. Let's jus say I was overwhelmed.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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LOL Thank you for the kind review. I am a complete tea drinker. So doing good. LOL
Comment from Neonewman
I enjoyed this excellent addition to Rachelle and Gretchen's book, Detour. I have enjoyed reading everyone's additions and hope my muse will show up soon. Thank you, Barbara, for sharing your virtual experience.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I enjoyed this excellent addition to Rachelle and Gretchen's book, Detour. I have enjoyed reading everyone's additions and hope my muse will show up soon. Thank you, Barbara, for sharing your virtual experience.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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My muse took a vacation, and I honestly didn't think I'd come up with anything. I guess I did, but am not really happy with it. Thank you for the support.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Wow Barbara, you mentioned so many Fanstory friends here and it sounds like your shyness soon disappeared after you me up with everybody at this convention! I simple loved your warm post, you took a deep breath and you went for it here and enjoyed the community spirit. Just one thing you need to change, and that's your title, you need to name if (Barbara Wilkey's Version). I absolutely loved it, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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Wow Barbara, you mentioned so many Fanstory friends here and it sounds like your shyness soon disappeared after you me up with everybody at this convention! I simple loved your warm post, you took a deep breath and you went for it here and enjoyed the community spirit. Just one thing you need to change, and that's your title, you need to name if (Barbara Wilkey's Version). I absolutely loved it, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 30-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2024
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I have made the change. Thank you for pointing it out and the encouragement.