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Comment from Blue Hendrix
Love this thought you did a spectacular job representing all of your characters and the imagery was great I felt like I was right there with you. Truly a great work way to go!
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Love this thought you did a spectacular job representing all of your characters and the imagery was great I felt like I was right there with you. Truly a great work way to go!
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you for the super review, and very encouraging compliments. Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Wendy, I loved your humble opening to include Sunny and how he can't eat until you are home, bless him, he loved you so much. I am honoured that you mentioned me and I am glad I helped you with your glamorous look, I bet you looked gorgeous. We both had odd accents compared to the Americans, but I would have understood your every word as my sister has turned into an Australian having spend most of her life there now.
Then you drop the bombshell as a scuffle starts and shocks everyone except Rachelle and Gretchen as they are used to Jane's antics! Your story is inventive and entertaining Wendy and I loved every word, a fine addition to the book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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This is hilarious Wendy, I loved your humble opening to include Sunny and how he can't eat until you are home, bless him, he loved you so much. I am honoured that you mentioned me and I am glad I helped you with your glamorous look, I bet you looked gorgeous. We both had odd accents compared to the Americans, but I would have understood your every word as my sister has turned into an Australian having spend most of her life there now.
Then you drop the bombshell as a scuffle starts and shocks everyone except Rachelle and Gretchen as they are used to Jane's antics! Your story is inventive and entertaining Wendy and I loved every word, a fine addition to the book, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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What a super review, thank you so much! This was such a fun thing to do, to be able to add a chapter to their very creative book. I am so pleased you enjoyed my chapter!
Wendy
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Yes I agree, Rachelle and Gretchen created something wonderful here, I am enjoying reading other people's versions of events, I loved your unique approach and the drama you created! Love Dolly x
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I dont think anyone was left out of this party! What a group we have here from all over the world. It really is quite amazing. This was so much fun and if we ever have a real life gathering I recommend Wendy to set it up. Great job lol
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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I dont think anyone was left out of this party! What a group we have here from all over the world. It really is quite amazing. This was so much fun and if we ever have a real life gathering I recommend Wendy to set it up. Great job lol
Comment Written 28-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2024
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Thank you so much Marilyn. But no - I would hate to be an events coordinator, especially where egos may be involved. I'd put all the wrong people together - and I rally prefer informal and relaxed over glamor! LOL. Thank you hugely for the six stars!
Wendy