At Home in Mississippi
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Comment from Julie Helms
Your story was well written, and kept my attention to the end. That can definitely be an awkward time of life, and you convey that feeling well, and the pressures that you were under from family and friends. I did not start dating until college, so I know how it feels to be later than everybody else on that.
I have a couple suggestions:
never seemed interested in learned to play well. She
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reason, mom gave me a surprise birthday
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Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your story
Julie
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reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Your story was well written, and kept my attention to the end. That can definitely be an awkward time of life, and you convey that feeling well, and the pressures that you were under from family and friends. I did not start dating until college, so I know how it feels to be later than everybody else on that.
I have a couple suggestions:
never seemed interested in learned to play well. She
(Missing end quote... well." She...)
reason, mom gave me a surprise birthday
(No comma)
Thanks for sharing, I enjoyed your story
Julie
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Comment Written 07-Oct-2024
reply by the author on 20-Oct-2024
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Thank you, Julie. I appreciate you helping me by finding the thing which needed correcting. I'm glad my story held your interest.
Beth