Parts are Parts
Parts of my Body are...Part Fiction~Part Non-Fiction49 total reviews
Comment from bob cullen
I love this, it proves my pet theory, most wanna be poets share a twisted and warped sense of humor. A really clever and creative write. I would however suggest a halving of your medication. If that's not an option, could you please advise exactly what you're taking so that I too may enjoy your outlook on life. I can't stop laughing.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I love this, it proves my pet theory, most wanna be poets share a twisted and warped sense of humor. A really clever and creative write. I would however suggest a halving of your medication. If that's not an option, could you please advise exactly what you're taking so that I too may enjoy your outlook on life. I can't stop laughing.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Bob , and thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks so much too for the awesome six stars.
Comment from Colorado Owl
This was fun to read. I love your use of "bone to pick with me". Your use of rhyme is excellent, especially the last line! (Is there a word missing from the end of the 5th stanza? I don't quite understand it.) Thank you.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This was fun to read. I love your use of "bone to pick with me". Your use of rhyme is excellent, especially the last line! (Is there a word missing from the end of the 5th stanza? I don't quite understand it.) Thank you.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hey Colorado Owl, thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing. Love the fake out on trying to get me to say the missing word. LOL.
Truth is, I am just too shy!! Thanks again!
Comment from nancyjam
This is a very entertaining and fun read. I really enjoyed it. It's amazing how body parts can be taken out, re-arranged or replaced and we can still function. Your rhymes are fun and th meter is good.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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This is a very entertaining and fun read. I really enjoyed it. It's amazing how body parts can be taken out, re-arranged or replaced and we can still function. Your rhymes are fun and th meter is good.
Best of luck in the contest.
Nancy
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Nancy, thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks again!
Comment from LJbutterfly
Hahaha! I totally understand your humorous description of your body. It sounds like parts of mine. I'm even shorter than I used to be. The rhythm and flow of your poem makes it easy to read and appreciate. It also makes a gal of my ilk feel like I'm not alone. I wish you the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hahaha! I totally understand your humorous description of your body. It sounds like parts of mine. I'm even shorter than I used to be. The rhythm and flow of your poem makes it easy to read and appreciate. It also makes a gal of my ilk feel like I'm not alone. I wish you the best in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Lorraine, thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks again!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You've had great fun here with some nice punning in your entertaining and amusing rhyming verse. I'm pleased though to learn that it isn't all non-fiction because I was getting a bit worried. Like the ortho doctor picking a bone with you:)) Well done and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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You've had great fun here with some nice punning in your entertaining and amusing rhyming verse. I'm pleased though to learn that it isn't all non-fiction because I was getting a bit worried. Like the ortho doctor picking a bone with you:)) Well done and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Debbie, thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks again!
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I love your closing line, very clever in this very cleverly written poem about an ageing physical body but the brain is being kept inthused by writing. I can relate to a few of these, LOL can't we all. Well done and good luck in the contest, I really enjoy it.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I love your closing line, very clever in this very cleverly written poem about an ageing physical body but the brain is being kept inthused by writing. I can relate to a few of these, LOL can't we all. Well done and good luck in the contest, I really enjoy it.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hey Valda, and thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks again!
Comment from F. William Lester
I appreciate your tongue-in-cheek approach to this prompt. I was laughing because I see so much of myself in it. I sag a lot more than I did when I was a young man. Very well done. Your humor in discussing this topic lends to the success of the poem. Nice work. Great humor. Good luck in the contest. Be well.
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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I appreciate your tongue-in-cheek approach to this prompt. I was laughing because I see so much of myself in it. I sag a lot more than I did when I was a young man. Very well done. Your humor in discussing this topic lends to the success of the poem. Nice work. Great humor. Good luck in the contest. Be well.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Hi Frank, thanks so very much for having some fun with me on this silly poem for the body. It was a lot of fun and that's my favorite kind of writing.
Thanks again!
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My pleasure.
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Hi Debi. The blinders were still on when I wrote the review so, I didn't know who I was reviewing. Hope you're well. I really liked the humor in your poem. Have a good day. Frank
Comment from Janet Foor
A fun poem about your body parts. Nice play on words as well. Much of what you say, I can relate to. My husband says that after 50, it's all maintenance. I think he might be right.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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A fun poem about your body parts. Nice play on words as well. Much of what you say, I can relate to. My husband says that after 50, it's all maintenance. I think he might be right.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Janet, for the awesome comments for my body parts poem. It was a fun one to do and I sure appreciate your kindness.
Comment from Ulla
It's a great an fun poem. At the same time, it's also quite a serious poem. Our body is most definitely our own and no one should ever have any say in that. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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It's a great an fun poem. At the same time, it's also quite a serious poem. Our body is most definitely our own and no one should ever have any say in that. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Ulla, for the awesome comments for my body parts poem. It was a fun one to do and I sure appreciate your kindness.
Comment from estory
What I liked about this was that you had a sense of humor about replacing all these body parts, and dealing with the pain and all that. I thought there was some great word play in it, you had a nice hip hop rhythm to it, and it kind of made replacing knees and hips feel like a run of the mill thing. estory
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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What I liked about this was that you had a sense of humor about replacing all these body parts, and dealing with the pain and all that. I thought there was some great word play in it, you had a nice hip hop rhythm to it, and it kind of made replacing knees and hips feel like a run of the mill thing. estory
Comment Written 13-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, estory, for the awesome comments for my body parts poem. It was a fun one to do and I sure appreciate your kindness.
