Willing Hearts
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Comment from Teri7
Now this is a really great chapter with Noah and Sami having their upset time and the cooling down was great! It was so sweet. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I am just so thankful I have six stars to give you for a six star review my friend. love and blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Now this is a really great chapter with Noah and Sami having their upset time and the cooling down was great! It was so sweet. I can't wait to read the next chapter. I am just so thankful I have six stars to give you for a six star review my friend. love and blessings, Teri
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 09-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jim vecchio
I like the way Sami and Noah's reltionship is advancing. I'm wondering if the cracked door really was a blunder. Did Smi nd Nosah get to eat that night? I found one small hiccup:
"as Noah said, "Sarah, take of things in here.": "take care of things"?
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I like the way Sami and Noah's reltionship is advancing. I'm wondering if the cracked door really was a blunder. Did Smi nd Nosah get to eat that night? I found one small hiccup:
"as Noah said, "Sarah, take of things in here.": "take care of things"?
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I can't count the number of times I've read that sentence and always thought 'care' was there. Thank you for the kind review and the catch.
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That's me, all the time!
Comment from estory
I thought this was a pretty strong chapter, maybe one of the best in the whole book. The opening segment was chocked full of tension, beginning with the explosion of the arrest of the intruder and the exchange between Noah and Gavin. I thought the emotion in Noah's voice was ratcheted up a notch, and very realistic. You are good at realistic, emotional dialogue. We get a pretty clear picture of the character and soul of Noah in this dialogue. He can get carried away, he isn't perfect, and that makes him believable. Then it transitions into the exchange with Sami, which is also realistic. We all get pulled into these moments, and need to apologize, and accept apologies. Sami has to swallow hard here, and do it. Nice job with this one. estory
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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I thought this was a pretty strong chapter, maybe one of the best in the whole book. The opening segment was chocked full of tension, beginning with the explosion of the arrest of the intruder and the exchange between Noah and Gavin. I thought the emotion in Noah's voice was ratcheted up a notch, and very realistic. You are good at realistic, emotional dialogue. We get a pretty clear picture of the character and soul of Noah in this dialogue. He can get carried away, he isn't perfect, and that makes him believable. Then it transitions into the exchange with Sami, which is also realistic. We all get pulled into these moments, and need to apologize, and accept apologies. Sami has to swallow hard here, and do it. Nice job with this one. estory
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the encouragement. I appreciate it.
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The focus was pretty good too. estory
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HUGS!!!
Comment from Begin Again
Congratulations on your milestone -- 1000. I am only a few posts behind you. I really enjoyed this chapter and could feel the true emotion between Noah and Sami this time. They are finally getting close and opening up to each other. Three cheers for Jasper as well. Give that pup a vest and hire him!
Well done, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Congratulations on your milestone -- 1000. I am only a few posts behind you. I really enjoyed this chapter and could feel the true emotion between Noah and Sami this time. They are finally getting close and opening up to each other. Three cheers for Jasper as well. Give that pup a vest and hire him!
Well done, Barbara.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review. HUGS!!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Great action here but, again, we seem to be left without details of the victim's injuries or Sami's response to her actions. The dialogue is excellent conveying Noah's anger and frustration with anyone who crosses his path. And he deserves to be. Thanks for sharing, Barbara.Take care Debbie
and phoned for (an) additional prisoner to pick up
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Great action here but, again, we seem to be left without details of the victim's injuries or Sami's response to her actions. The dialogue is excellent conveying Noah's anger and frustration with anyone who crosses his path. And he deserves to be. Thanks for sharing, Barbara.Take care Debbie
and phoned for (an) additional prisoner to pick up
I('m) sorry for my comment
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the catches. I can't believe I made those mistakes, but I sure did. I appreciate the help.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very well chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Congratulations on this being you're 1000th post on fan story. Have a good weekend and God bless. Patricia.
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reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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This is a very well chapter for your book and I enjoyed very much listening to it. Congratulations on this being you're 1000th post on fan story. Have a good weekend and God bless. Patricia.
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Comment Written 08-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2024
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Thank you for the kind review.