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Forever Wrapped In Your Love

Out of sight but never out of mind

23 total reviews 
Comment from Carol Clark2
Exceptional
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A wonderful love story! I know Michael is always in your heart and your mind, and it's good that he's also in your dreams. Yes, God always hears and answers, sometimes even before we can ask. Well done! Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    I was having a down in the dumps morning and then suddenly this story popped into my mind...strange how my spirits lifted as I wrote. Had to count my blessings one more time. Thank you for understanding where this story came from... deep inside my heart and mind.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by Carol Clark2 on 07-Sep-2024
    I'm glad your writing cheered you up. It's always good to count our blessings. As the old hymn says, 'it will surprise you what the Lord has done.' Have a blessed week.
Comment from BethShelby
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Beautiful love story Carol. i know how you feel because I've been talking to the love of my life who I know is only there in my heart and memory but he's there there in my dreams and the memory is sweet. I still feel loved.

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 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thanks, Beth! I do know that you understand this story and are living it too. I don'tknow how he creeped into my thought this morning and sent me whirling for a while, but writing the story brought me peace. Thank you so much.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Exceptional
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Nicely done again! The imagery of the beach is wonderful. The intimate moments between Carol and Michael create such a touching scene. The dialogue are so heartfelt. I could feel a sense of longing and comfort reading it. The final line where she finds peace in knowing that God is there was perfect. This is wonderfully written and so enjoyable to read.

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 07-Sep-2024
    Thank you so much for your wonderful word, the glittery stars and your kindness. Guess I was taking a stroll down memory lane today and things got a little salty. But then I was reminded how blessed I am and thus.... the story.
    Smiles and hugs, Carol