The Guy You Love to Hate
A Teikei-shi for the club43 total reviews
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a delightful little poem with a great ending, cleverly written. I hope your treatment everyday will help save your eye. You have enough things beside that to worry about. May you give all you concerns to God and He give you peace with the knowledge that He loves you, and whatever happens about anything, He is with you.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
This is a delightful little poem with a great ending, cleverly written. I hope your treatment everyday will help save your eye. You have enough things beside that to worry about. May you give all you concerns to God and He give you peace with the knowledge that He loves you, and whatever happens about anything, He is with you.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Verna, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Today was about the same, but he gave me steroid cream for my eye to use among the regimen I am on now and already I can feel some of the swelling his down. He won't let me use them long because it will slow down the healing. And today he said he can't stress enough of how dangerous this is for me right now, for this eye alone, but also trying to keep the infection out of my other eye too. Thank you again for all the prayers. You just can't know how much they mean to me right now. Especially from people like you, who I know are really praying. Love you dearly. Debi
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Praying here, dear, right now. Love you, Verna
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You and Leon are also in mine, dear sister.
Thank you and love you right back. Debi
Comment from Janet Foor
LOL! what a fun and funny teikei-shi-poem for the Japanese poetry club.
This is a rare form - kind of like a limerick in sound and style. I enjoyed the lighthearted banter of the poem.
Well done Debi.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
LOL! what a fun and funny teikei-shi-poem for the Japanese poetry club.
This is a rare form - kind of like a limerick in sound and style. I enjoyed the lighthearted banter of the poem.
Well done Debi.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hello, dear Janet, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Today was about the same, but he gave me steroid cream for my eye to use among the regimen I am on now and already I can feel some of the swelling his down. He won't let me use them long because it will slow down the healing. And today he said he can't stress enough of how dangerous this is for me right now, for this eye alone, but also trying to keep the infection out of my other eye too. Thank you again for all the prayers. You just can't know how much they mean to me right now. Especially from people like you, who I know are really praying. Love you dearly.
Any change on your grandson? He has been in my thoughts and prayers since we talked and will continue. I know how hard it must be for you as I know it is to love those grandchildren so deeply. Please keep me updated.
Comment from Nicki.B
Ah this is great Debi, it's really funny but the same time it's saying...whoops what have you gone and done!! I bet she loves him at he same lol
My first time seeing that style poem, it all fits great the title, image and lovely rhyming poem.
Well done!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
Ah this is great Debi, it's really funny but the same time it's saying...whoops what have you gone and done!! I bet she loves him at he same lol
My first time seeing that style poem, it all fits great the title, image and lovely rhyming poem.
Well done!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Nicki, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from jmdg1954
Phew... I thought this poem was going to be about me when I read the title. But I never saw my name do I hopefully am off the hook after that f-duck debacle!
Haha... just having fun.
Excellent Teikei-shi rhymed Japanese poem (like I know sooooo much about poetry).
But honestly, a good read.
Enjoy your Thursday, my dear.
John
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
Phew... I thought this poem was going to be about me when I read the title. But I never saw my name do I hopefully am off the hook after that f-duck debacle!
Haha... just having fun.
Excellent Teikei-shi rhymed Japanese poem (like I know sooooo much about poetry).
But honestly, a good read.
Enjoy your Thursday, my dear.
John
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2024
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Hahaha! Are you so sure it isn''t, Mr I fduck into all the corners. When you are done here, go check your email.
LOL. I love having some fun with you, since I am going thru something big and I think I will email you that too and let you know. You are good enough friend and I could use the prayers. So expect two emails from me.
Thanks for this fun review. You know how to make me smile, dear bro.
Love and hugs, Debi
Comment from gansach
This is a great poem, Debi. This is another new form for me. I really like it. You've given it a great presentation, the rhyme is perfect, the syllable count is correct and reads very naturally, not forced at all. And it's a great message--you don't want to get stuck with the obnoxious arguer-LOL! Wonderful! I enjoyed it very much!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
This is a great poem, Debi. This is another new form for me. I really like it. You've given it a great presentation, the rhyme is perfect, the syllable count is correct and reads very naturally, not forced at all. And it's a great message--you don't want to get stuck with the obnoxious arguer-LOL! Wonderful! I enjoyed it very much!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Gail, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Shanbreen
Well written, Debi. I know of people like that--people who cannot communicate at the fundamental level but always up front, ready to debate. Thanks for sharing your Teikei-shi rhymed poem. It flows very well.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
Well written, Debi. I know of people like that--people who cannot communicate at the fundamental level but always up front, ready to debate. Thanks for sharing your Teikei-shi rhymed poem. It flows very well.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Sanbreen, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Some women allow lust to choose her partner. Not a good choice. Then she's stuck with twenty kids. LOL God should choose our life partners. He will never lead us in the wrong way. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading and got a smile.
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
Some women allow lust to choose her partner. Not a good choice. Then she's stuck with twenty kids. LOL God should choose our life partners. He will never lead us in the wrong way. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading and got a smile.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Barb, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the sweet comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Mintybee
This poem with only one rhyme is good. The lines are clear and flow into each other well. The theme is consistent and contains a life lesson.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
This poem with only one rhyme is good. The lines are clear and flow into each other well. The theme is consistent and contains a life lesson.
Mintybee
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hi Mintybee, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nice entry for the contest I like the rhymes chosen and the image of a bickering couple debating is priceless I like the last few words as it sums up the mood
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
nice entry for the contest I like the rhymes chosen and the image of a bickering couple debating is priceless I like the last few words as it sums up the mood
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Hey Jake, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
A new style poem to me but I like it. You did a great job with it. I feel like I've met the guy you're describing lol. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
A new style poem to me but I like it. You did a great job with it. I feel like I've met the guy you're describing lol. Thanks for sharing. Have a great day!
Comment Written 29-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 30-Aug-2024
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Marilyn, I sure appreciate your lovely review for my fun spirited Teikei-shi poem. I love when the Japanese have you rhyme. LOL. After all that is me all the way. Thanks again for the fun comments too, my dear friend.
Love, Debi