Comment from Mia Twysted

Excellent

Sounds like a great party. I almost feel like I am there myself putting a few beers back nd listening to the music play. You did a great job. It had a slow but steady pace and near the end I swear I I felt like I had a buzz.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

LOL! Well, I think we have all been there at least once. Thank you!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

This is all very lyrical and could well be the words to a song. You skilfully capture the atmosphere, the wildness and the sexual thrill of Saturday night and make me mourn the good old days:)) Well done, Harry! Debbie

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

LOL! Well, thank you Debbie. I think we have all been here at least once. I really appreciate your review.

Comment from forestport12

Excellent

I think this has potential as lyrics to a song. The repetition is there and just needs some tweaks. I would put a chorus in it. You have a good start or plot line.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Well, thank you forestport12. I really appreciate the review!

Comment from Jumbo J

Excellent

Hi Harry,
sorta took me back to the eighties when life seemed so simple and straightforward. I know this scene, hell I think I may have been a player in this story:>)

Your story poem had a very lyrical tone to it... and with a hook and chorus could easily be turned into a song in my opinion.

With our thoughts we create...
a connection to our youth.

Kind regards,
James.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Aug-2024

Yes, James. I think we have all been there at least once. Thank you for the review!

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

nicely done poem about young people drinking up a storm on a Saturday night hoping to end the night with a new lover for the night - like the last line best

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Well, thanks Jake. Yes, that was the moral of the story. I appreciate your review!

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

The young and wild do seem to enjoy themselves. Thank you for describing this situation very well and it insinuates a lot too. This is a good write.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Well, thank you Barbara. I believe we have all been there one time or another. I really appreciate your review!

Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

Boy, I haven't had a wild time on a Saturday in many a year. But I do have a few memories. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

LOL! Well, thank you papa55mike. I really appreciate your review!

Comment from jaded831

Excellent

Many people can relate to this poem, including myself. No matter how tough life gets, having good friends and family, makes everything right. I love happy endings. Your poem gets a thumbs up from me.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Well, thank you again Jaded831 for your great review! Yes, I think we have all been here at least once. I really appreciate that!

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

I guess she is being nice to guys she meets and in this poem is perfect for her date night. The stanzas are creative and I enjoy it because of the girl. Excellent work! Nice.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

LOL! Well, thank you Raul. I really appreciate the kind words and your review!

Comment from astyanax

Good

I like it, just a simple story that rhymes. I am like that too. I don't think I am good either but believe we all have a poet within us and trying is all we can do.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2024

Yes, astyanax you are so right. Thank you for your review. I really appreciate that!