The Coyote Boys
Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Family Trees"Story about two brothers who change their destiny.
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Comment from Rachelle Allen
I've turned into a coyote reading this, because I'm delighting in my fellow wild beasts finally unleashing their fury on this pond scum. It's harder and harder to like their mom, though, I have to confess. She knew all these secrets and allowed them to percolate with her "child's wishful thinking." Nice "revving up" here toward the denouement. xoxox
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reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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I've turned into a coyote reading this, because I'm delighting in my fellow wild beasts finally unleashing their fury on this pond scum. It's harder and harder to like their mom, though, I have to confess. She knew all these secrets and allowed them to percolate with her "child's wishful thinking." Nice "revving up" here toward the denouement. xoxox
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Comment Written 09-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2024
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The mother is weak, but in those times, there weren't any resources for women. But, I think I would have gone down swinging if he had hurt one of my children. Thank you for your honest feedback. I live you for that. Gretchen
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Same. Or if he'd hurt me, either. My ex-husband did that once, and my comment to him later that evening was, "The next time you feel the need to physically hurt me again, I want you to remember two things: The first is that I am a very vengeful person, and the second is that you're a very heavy sleeper." He moved out shortly thereafter...because I'm juuuuuuust that level of unnerving, I guess.