The umbrella's wise story
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Comment from Bill Schott
This cinquain, The Umbrella's Wise Story, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to distinguish between temporary arguments and the deeper and better feelings which really matter.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This cinquain, The Umbrella's Wise Story, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers to distinguish between temporary arguments and the deeper and better feelings which really matter.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you Bill, for this succinct and excellent review.
Wendy
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very nicely written poem for the cinquain contest entry. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a blessed weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This is a very nicely written poem for the cinquain contest entry. I wish you the very best in the contest and may you have a blessed weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thanks so much Patricia for your very nice review.
Wendy
Comment from ElPoetry001
A metaphorical reality that embraces the fact that we are many, yet one.
We prosper when we embrace others, and ourselves.
A protective web; unseen, yet as powerful as electricity.
Succinct.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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A metaphorical reality that embraces the fact that we are many, yet one.
We prosper when we embrace others, and ourselves.
A protective web; unseen, yet as powerful as electricity.
Succinct.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much for thoughtfully reviewing. I appreciate it.
Wendy
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Stay well
Comment from karenina
I'm under the weather today...
What could be better than this wise cinquain with this umbrella metaphor?
I'm frequently amazed when I'm in distress and come to FS ...
This is the third poem in a row that feels like THIS is why God nudged me, although I am sick in bed, to sign in!
Thank you...and thank God!
Karenina
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I'm under the weather today...
What could be better than this wise cinquain with this umbrella metaphor?
I'm frequently amazed when I'm in distress and come to FS ...
This is the third poem in a row that feels like THIS is why God nudged me, although I am sick in bed, to sign in!
Thank you...and thank God!
Karenina
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Oh that's not good news. I do hope you feel better very soon. But I am glad you have been encouraged a little by FS. Thank you so much for reviewing, even though you are so unwell.
Wendy
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Kindles are great for bedtime reading and reviewing!
:)
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A great interpretation of the image. I enjoyed the sharing quality of the umbrella and the fact that his unselfishness meant that he suffered the pain of the rain. A truly devoted act. And no chance of that happening round here:)) Nicely done in this short cinquain format. Well done and good luck, Wendy! Debbie
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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A great interpretation of the image. I enjoyed the sharing quality of the umbrella and the fact that his unselfishness meant that he suffered the pain of the rain. A truly devoted act. And no chance of that happening round here:)) Nicely done in this short cinquain format. Well done and good luck, Wendy! Debbie
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and good wishes. Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Wow!
This a perfect demonstration of love in action.
Except his pipe would soon not pipe at all. (smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Wow!
This a perfect demonstration of love in action.
Except his pipe would soon not pipe at all. (smiley face here)
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Lol. True! But I am sure that within a couple of minutes they have both moved to the centre of the bench, and are sharing the umbrella. Thanks so much for this great review, and for the six stars.Always much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is lovely - and true. No matter how mad I ever am at my Sweet Bobby or he at me, before either of us leaves the house, we always smooch - and not the peck-on-the-cheek kind, either - and say, "Drive safely." Anger is temporary; love for each other is not.
Beautifully done, Wendy, including the adorable artwork. xo
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This is lovely - and true. No matter how mad I ever am at my Sweet Bobby or he at me, before either of us leaves the house, we always smooch - and not the peck-on-the-cheek kind, either - and say, "Drive safely." Anger is temporary; love for each other is not.
Beautifully done, Wendy, including the adorable artwork. xo
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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That is wonderful - and I am sure that a minute or two later, this cartoon couple were sitting together in the middle of the bench sharing the umbrella! Lovely review - thank you!
Wendy
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You're welcome! xoxo
Comment from Begin Again
Good one, Wendy! Reminding us that we are human and we may disagree, but true love never runs away and will reach out to protect those we share it with regardless of moment. Loved it!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Good one, Wendy! Reminding us that we are human and we may disagree, but true love never runs away and will reach out to protect those we share it with regardless of moment. Loved it!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thank you Carol. There are many who imagine love is perfect 100 percent of the time. I don't think that is possible! Thanks so much for reviewing.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This piece is rather different from your normal submissions, and the dude should be applauded; however once the offer is accepted the proper thing to do is to share and get him out of the rain.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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This piece is rather different from your normal submissions, and the dude should be applauded; however once the offer is accepted the proper thing to do is to share and get him out of the rain.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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I think that one minutes later, they had both moved into the centre of the bench and were happy again.
Wendy
Comment from royowen
An excellent cimquain Wendy, oh yes, Elaine and I squabble somrtimes, but I know like me, she's committed to the relationship, as she is committed to all the relationships she has, plus her volunteer commitments, beautifully written Wendy, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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An excellent cimquain Wendy, oh yes, Elaine and I squabble somrtimes, but I know like me, she's committed to the relationship, as she is committed to all the relationships she has, plus her volunteer commitments, beautifully written Wendy, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2024
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Thanks Roy. I appreciate your time and review.
Wendy
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Most welcome
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Most welcome
