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Finding my Inner Peace

For Gypsy's Finding Your Muse Club

47 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This poem, Finding My Inner Peace, presented with four uni-rhymed quatrains, reminds the readers that God presents us with the ear and voice which transcends all other communications and touches us just as it should. Nice.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Hi Bill, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from Heather Knight
Exceptional
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Lovely mono rhyme in each of your verses, I like it very much.
I think inner peace is the most important thing we can have. Without it, it's impossible to be happy.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    You are such a sweetie pie. Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this beautiful review and the kindest of words; not to mention the sweet six stars. Thanks from the bottom of my heart. You are the best, my sweet friend.
    PS, how is that grandbaby of yours doing?
reply by Heather Knight on 21-Aug-2024
    Hello. I'm sorry it's taken me so long to answer, but I haven't been around lately.
    Annie is doing great. She turns 8 months old today. It seems impossible. Right now she's breastfeeding (I was playing with her, but she got grumpy because she was hungry).
    How are you? I hope everything is okay. xxx
Comment from jessizero
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I appreciate your author's notes about the syllable count for "comfortable."This was an inspiring poem, and the font was easy to read. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Hi Jessi, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from jake cosmos aller
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A nice exposition of your profound Christian faith explaining what your faith means to you. I like the simple direct language which is a hallmark of your poetic style

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Hi Jake, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I really appreciate your respect so much.
    Debi
Comment from GWHARGIS
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I think you wrote this and God purposely let me see it. I needed this. The past couple of weeks, I have been physically down. In great pain. I groaned all night last night. This morning I sat down and prayed. It was the sweet release I needed. Beautifully written. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Dearest Gretchen, I was on family vacation all last week so kinda behind here.

    I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
reply by GWHARGIS on 04-Aug-2024
    Life happens, and thankfully you were enjoying yourself. Never apologize for late responses. Gretchen
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
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Debi,
This is a great club entry.
Sometimes we all feel that "brick wall" with other people, but not with God.
Your rhymes are nice; I really love the photo!
Best wishes, Debi.
Cindy

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Cindy, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I am pretty sure, at least for me, and I bet for others, that without God leading our lives we won't know truly inner peace. I enjoyed reading.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Barb, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from jim vecchio
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What an excellent entry for this Club Event! The fonts and background coloring worked well together. Your message reminds us that, as long as God is in control, we need not fear and can overcome anxiety.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Hi Jim, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
reply by jim vecchio on 04-Aug-2024
    Your peace was a wonderful piece!
Comment from nomi338
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The giver and granter of life also grants you peace. Satan the Devil will always try to rob you and take away your peace, but don't you let him. Concentrate upon the great sacrifice of God's only begotten son and know that he willingly surrendered his life to guarantee you a future of peace, love, and happiness.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
    Hey Sweetie brother you, I thank you for your kind words for my inner peace poem. I appreciate it so much.
    Debi
Comment from Gunner Lil
Exceptional
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A super job. Well done! Like how each line rhymes.
An easy read that has wonderful flow and an excellent pace.
Thank you for sharing this and good luck!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Thank you so very much, Gunner. I appreciate the awesome comments as well as the honor of your six stars. Thank you again, dear friend. Love, Debi