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Comment from BethShelby
I'm loving the story. I thought in Rachel's version the horses where sprinting toward both of you. I think I would be more likely to react to all of this more like you. I'm not exactly a Pollyanna, I've been around crowing roosters but I was able to tune them out. It is nice trick to learn. Otherwise they would have short live spans.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I'm loving the story. I thought in Rachel's version the horses where sprinting toward both of you. I think I would be more likely to react to all of this more like you. I'm not exactly a Pollyanna, I've been around crowing roosters but I was able to tune them out. It is nice trick to learn. Otherwise they would have short live spans.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I'm great in a crisis but I figure the guys know what they are doing, therefore I would be in the way. We have a rooster in our neighborhood. Two in the afternoon the dang thing starts up. Lol. Thanks so much for this. Gretchen
Comment from Mrs. KT
Ah, Gretchen!
I've been awol a bit lately, but I'm here today, and I absolutely love this chapter!
I especially enjoyed the opening segment wherein you awake to the rooster crowing and seeing Rachelle in a far too large dress! Your descriptions are stellar and inviting to this reader's imagination!
Just a stellar chapter from start to finish!
Thank you for sharing!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Ah, Gretchen!
I've been awol a bit lately, but I'm here today, and I absolutely love this chapter!
I especially enjoyed the opening segment wherein you awake to the rooster crowing and seeing Rachelle in a far too large dress! Your descriptions are stellar and inviting to this reader's imagination!
Just a stellar chapter from start to finish!
Thank you for sharing!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. This story is a lot of fun to write. I'm glad you are having fun reading this. I really appreciate the encouraging review. And the six too. Gretchen
Comment from Wayne Fowler
This remains a great concept. I'm enjoying it.
And it's very well written - both sides of the story!
smiley face here
"Don't blow it by being a hero." - Maybe insert 'dead' hero.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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This remains a great concept. I'm enjoying it.
And it's very well written - both sides of the story!
smiley face here
"Don't blow it by being a hero." - Maybe insert 'dead' hero.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Lol. Dead was supposed to be implied. Thanks for this, Wayne. Glad you are still enjoying it. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I am hoping Ezra isn't hurt. I am wondering what got into that horse. Something must have spooked him, maybe a snake. I can't wait to read more. You two wonderful authors are doing a great job.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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I am hoping Ezra isn't hurt. I am wondering what got into that horse. Something must have spooked him, maybe a snake. I can't wait to read more. You two wonderful authors are doing a great job.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Barbara. I think it's a snake as well. When I was younger I was horseback riding and my friend's horse saw one and took off. She fell but luckily wasn't hurt too bad. I appreciate this nice review. Gretchen