Comment from Cindy Decker 3

Excellent

Jim,
Your club entry is very clever; was this a false prophet, relying on gimmicks?
I'm not familiar with the Bible passage you used.
Either way it's a very interesting story.
Very-well written.
I hope this note finds you in good health!
Best wishes,
Cindy

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

This was an "imaginary tale" occurring during the time of Paul's Second of three missionary journeys.

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. That would surely cause a lot of problems. I enjoyed reading this post and you did a wonderful job writing it.

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thank you for your very kind words!

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

This definitely qualifies for exaggeration and hyperbole.
Good work.
...to hear your common sense message!." - oops
Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 26-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thank you very much!