Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

This is one of those poem and picture combinations that fit together perfectly. But I'm wondering it the ring is a halo or a ring of fire, accenting those flaming eyes? :-) Thanks of sharing and best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you!

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton

Excellent

An excellent entry for the Love Poem writing prompt. the criteria for the prompt was met in 15 words. The artwork was very interesting and makes us wonder if the girl with the halo had a side to her that was also non-angelic. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you!

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

This is an unusually short expression of your feelings of love. Fifteen words is not much. However, the combination of both your poem and artwork, deliver a feeling of love. Best wishes in the contest.

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 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you!