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Return To Concorde Valley

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Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.

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Oh no! Why or why would they stoop so low as t take something that means the world to Theo? Because they cab, of course. I know he believes he must stick to his bargain, but I pray that in the end, something else will come of it. Marvelous chapter.
Smiles, Carol

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 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Carol,
    Thank you for reviewing my work. I haven't forgotten yours, I've just fallen terribly behind. I've had houseguests and family issues that have taken so much of my time. I still think about the ghosts!!
    Hugs,
    Rhonda
reply by Begin Again on 09-Jul-2024
    I've started a new on...Prologue and 3 chapters.... I don't want you to fall too far behind. It's easier if you read as we go. But I understand when it's summer and guests arrive and if something can go wrong, it usually does. Take care of your issues first.
    Smiles, Carol