The Words
Inspiring a dream.26 total reviews
Comment from karenina
Jodi, this is exquisitely penned! Writers need to communicate and feel that kindred spirit speaking to them. It lifts them up, and both are enchanted to soar on thermals to the highest heights! It's a pleasure to be here watching your success. FanStory brings a wonderful forum to showcase our work ~ and friendships that blossom!
Karenina
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Jodi, this is exquisitely penned! Writers need to communicate and feel that kindred spirit speaking to them. It lifts them up, and both are enchanted to soar on thermals to the highest heights! It's a pleasure to be here watching your success. FanStory brings a wonderful forum to showcase our work ~ and friendships that blossom!
Karenina
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the great review as always! I wish one day that we could meet! What state do you live in? Also, do you go by Karen?
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I live in Massachusetts...
Karenina is the name my father wanted for me, because "Anna Karenina" was his favorite novel. My mom whittled that down to Karen... (She who endures labor wins the battle!)
Smile...
So yes, it's Karen, although my friends mostly call me "K"--
Where are you?
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I?m in Colorado. (I grew up in Illinois) I really love it here with the mountains and everything. It?s just beautiful!
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Duh. I knew that! (Breckenridge!)
Sorry--I forgot!
Comment from June Sargent
Sounds like you've found your muse! One who inspires you with words and knows your true heart and soul, forwarding your dreams forever. Great sentiments expressed with perfect rhythm and rhyme!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Sounds like you've found your muse! One who inspires you with words and knows your true heart and soul, forwarding your dreams forever. Great sentiments expressed with perfect rhythm and rhyme!
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Oh thank you for the nice review! Poetry is my recent obsession!
Comment from patcelaw
This is absolutely beautiful and I love listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud your structure and your punctuation are very good so it makes it for a nice smooth. Read. Have a wonderful day and a good weekend. Patricia.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is absolutely beautiful and I love listening to it. It flows very well when it is read aloud your structure and your punctuation are very good so it makes it for a nice smooth. Read. Have a wonderful day and a good weekend. Patricia.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks Patricia! I really appreciate your kind words!
Comment from Colorado Owl
What a beautiful dream! I love the line,
"My knowledge bloomed beneath your wing,
As my emotions swam upstream."
Thank you for sharing this with us.
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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What a beautiful dream! I love the line,
"My knowledge bloomed beneath your wing,
As my emotions swam upstream."
Thank you for sharing this with us.
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the great review! It means a lot!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is such a pretty poem. Just plain PRETTY! I read it several times and it just flows and your words are soft and dreamy. Thanks for sharing. i honestly loved it.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is such a pretty poem. Just plain PRETTY! I read it several times and it just flows and your words are soft and dreamy. Thanks for sharing. i honestly loved it.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Oh I do appreciate this! You truly made my day! Thank you so, so much!
Comment from CornishChick
This is so lovely. It's thought-provoking because the language is unexpected. I especially love the first line... a fabulous lead in to the rest of the poem. Poetry is probably my weakness, but I'm reading it and working at understanding! I've come to the conclusion that a few lines of poetry is more difficult than writing a story, a chapter, or even a book! so, kudos to you for evoking emotion in so few lines!!
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reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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This is so lovely. It's thought-provoking because the language is unexpected. I especially love the first line... a fabulous lead in to the rest of the poem. Poetry is probably my weakness, but I'm reading it and working at understanding! I've come to the conclusion that a few lines of poetry is more difficult than writing a story, a chapter, or even a book! so, kudos to you for evoking emotion in so few lines!!
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Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much! I?m pretty new at poetry too, just within the last year. I?m obsessed with it so much now. I appreciate you!
