The Brownies That Weren't There
Humorous rhymed poem about brownies38 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh no! I will be craving brownies all day now! Thanks heaps! (LOL)
What a delightful poem, and I'm sure it will sit as well with the judges as those brownies will sit on... Oh, never mind! To heck with diets. :)))
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Oh no! I will be craving brownies all day now! Thanks heaps! (LOL)
What a delightful poem, and I'm sure it will sit as well with the judges as those brownies will sit on... Oh, never mind! To heck with diets. :)))
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and commenting today!
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Aussie
Are they like muffins? We don't have brownies here, except the Girl Guides juniors and you can't eat them cause the Scouts would really take the icing off your brownies! ð??? Well written for the Temptation contest. Good luck and put a lock on the fridge!
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Are they like muffins? We don't have brownies here, except the Girl Guides juniors and you can't eat them cause the Scouts would really take the icing off your brownies! ð??? Well written for the Temptation contest. Good luck and put a lock on the fridge!
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you for a funny review. Brownies are like fudge--but with flour. I used to be a Brownie in Girl Scouts for all of three months or so. Thank you for stopping by to review!
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I hope you didn't sleep in the fridge!
Comment from Wendy G
Lol. A humorous and well writte poem, perfect for the temptation contest! Your flow is super - excellent metre and rhyme, and the presentation is perfect too. Sending best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Lol. A humorous and well writte poem, perfect for the temptation contest! Your flow is super - excellent metre and rhyme, and the presentation is perfect too. Sending best wishes for your entry!
Wendy
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your compliment-filled review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
When on a diet it is best not to make delicious brownies! They are far too tempting and this poem has a great story for the contest Crystie, you made my mouth water here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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When on a diet it is best not to make delicious brownies! They are far too tempting and this poem has a great story for the contest Crystie, you made my mouth water here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your super review. I try not to have these in the house too often, ha ha.
Comment from patcelaw
When it comes to a plate of chocolate of any kind, chocolate pie, chocolate cookies, chocolate brownies, chocolate fudge, any of those and I am one who has almost no control. I have actually had times when I have made myself sick by eating too many pieces of fudge. Patricia.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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When it comes to a plate of chocolate of any kind, chocolate pie, chocolate cookies, chocolate brownies, chocolate fudge, any of those and I am one who has almost no control. I have actually had times when I have made myself sick by eating too many pieces of fudge. Patricia.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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I totally get your personal comments in the review there. I am pretty sure I am addicted, although I did go about four days without chocolate this past week and then wondered what I should get to make up for it, ha ha.
Comment from Neonewman
Nothing wrong with sugar cookies either, lol. But I'd keep the brownies a secret if I was you. What a fun, well-crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Nothing wrong with sugar cookies either, lol. But I'd keep the brownies a secret if I was you. What a fun, well-crafted piece you have delivered.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your wise review, Steve.
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My pleasure.
Comment from lyenochka
Lol! Of course, you're not "ill-bred" and of course, you wouldn't eat them all in reality but I can imagine how those scrumptious chocolate brownies could call to you in your dreams! Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Lol! Of course, you're not "ill-bred" and of course, you wouldn't eat them all in reality but I can imagine how those scrumptious chocolate brownies could call to you in your dreams! Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your super review. I actually ate the brownies that were on the smaller plate, not the larger one. That would have been too many.
Comment from royowen
sometimes we simply need a word to rhyme, a lot of what we write is based on fact, I guess we'd have nothing to write about, every two years I write one or two a day, which means I can't reject a revelation, this is quirky and very intersting, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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sometimes we simply need a word to rhyme, a lot of what we write is based on fact, I guess we'd have nothing to write about, every two years I write one or two a day, which means I can't reject a revelation, this is quirky and very intersting, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your fun review.
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Most welcome
Comment from judiverse
Brownies are hard to pass up. I got Marcel Desaulniers' book "Death by Chocolate," and it has a delicious recipe for brownies. I happen to have some brownies (box mix) on hand now, and they are delicious. I must say I have resisted temptation to eat them all, limiting myself to two small ones a day. This is fun to read. I think readers can relate. When you have chocolate brownies around, it's hard to resist the temptation. I like the resolution--making sugar cookies for your friends. Great take on the temptation topic. I'd probably have chosen the same topic--chocolate. Great rhyme. Best of luck in the contest. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Brownies are hard to pass up. I got Marcel Desaulniers' book "Death by Chocolate," and it has a delicious recipe for brownies. I happen to have some brownies (box mix) on hand now, and they are delicious. I must say I have resisted temptation to eat them all, limiting myself to two small ones a day. This is fun to read. I think readers can relate. When you have chocolate brownies around, it's hard to resist the temptation. I like the resolution--making sugar cookies for your friends. Great take on the temptation topic. I'd probably have chosen the same topic--chocolate. Great rhyme. Best of luck in the contest. judi
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review and the well wishes.
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You're very welcome. Brownies are a temptation. judi
Comment from QC Poet
Your brownie temptation is shared by myself but as a diabetic the temptation is great enough for me to now check my sugar level before digging in. Thanks for Sharing your delicious temptation poem
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your brownie temptation is shared by myself but as a diabetic the temptation is great enough for me to now check my sugar level before digging in. Thanks for Sharing your delicious temptation poem
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Yes, I am also learning the hard way not to eat too much sugar in one day or it messes up digestion. Thank you for your personalized comments.
