Days Gone By
A man reminices23 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
This was a perfectly charming 100 word story for the writing prompt. I enjoyed reading it. Your last sentence was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This was a perfectly charming 100 word story for the writing prompt. I enjoyed reading it. Your last sentence was great. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Good morning! Thank you so much for reading my flash and enjoying. I think holding on to the love of his life was his greatest accomplishment. Have a great day!
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, Days Gone By, has the proper word count and finds the man, finding himself at the far side of his life, but with the main treasures still kept at home. Nice.
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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This one-hundred-word story, Days Gone By, has the proper word count and finds the man, finding himself at the far side of his life, but with the main treasures still kept at home. Nice.
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Good morning, Bill! Yes, regardless of his past and what he lost, he had the most important thing in his life - her love withheld the dangerous and high-powered time and remained to watch the sunset. Thanks! Have a great day!
Comment from phill doran
Hello Anon,
Very good. The piece has atmosphere and the pay-off line certainly meets the 'twist' requirements of such a short, short story.
I am sure you have checked and double checked, but I make it 100 words on the nose.
I think this is a very tight piece of writing and I wish you well with this in your competition and with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Hello Anon,
Very good. The piece has atmosphere and the pay-off line certainly meets the 'twist' requirements of such a short, short story.
I am sure you have checked and double checked, but I make it 100 words on the nose.
I think this is a very tight piece of writing and I wish you well with this in your competition and with your continued writing.
cheers
phill
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Good morning, Phil! Thanks for taking the time to read and hopefully enjoy my little flash story. I like to add a twist at the end so I hope you were surprised that I didn't shoot him. LOL Have a great day!
