I've had enough!
The decision has been made ...30 total reviews
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is cute and I was surprised when the person you were yelling at was a soft pillow.
What a twist in the plot! I love the picture of the girl yelling loudly at who knows who and it turns out it was a pillow causing all the fuss.
It's funny flash fiction and I enjoyed reading it.
Jesse
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This is cute and I was surprised when the person you were yelling at was a soft pillow.
What a twist in the plot! I love the picture of the girl yelling loudly at who knows who and it turns out it was a pillow causing all the fuss.
It's funny flash fiction and I enjoyed reading it.
Jesse
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I am glad you enjoyed it and saw the humour of the poor old tired lady. Me! Thanks for reviewing.
Wendy
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Ha! I had no idea it was you!
Take care,
Jesse
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I really enjoyed this one. In the beginning you obviously think she's talking about a person or at least I did and then it doesn't 180 and makes you realize that that's not what she's talking about at all. Very clever I enjoyed it. All the best going forward.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I really enjoyed this one. In the beginning you obviously think she's talking about a person or at least I did and then it doesn't 180 and makes you realize that that's not what she's talking about at all. Very clever I enjoyed it. All the best going forward.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much Nicole. I am so glad you enjoyed it!
Wendy
Comment from Pam (respa)
Good artwork and story to go with it, Wendy. Very good opening paragraphs set the tone and mood, making us think something is dreadfully wrong. Very good descriptive words and phrases. I like how you follow up the line about going to the dogs. A very good entry; good luck in the contest. Very well done!
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Good artwork and story to go with it, Wendy. Very good opening paragraphs set the tone and mood, making us think something is dreadfully wrong. Very good descriptive words and phrases. I like how you follow up the line about going to the dogs. A very good entry; good luck in the contest. Very well done!
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much Pam. It means a lot to get this lovely review.
Wendy
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You are very welcome, Wendy.
Comment from Bill Schott
This dribble, I've Had Enough, has the proper formatting and captures the dramatic conclusion of the pillow-talk tale that started on a bed and eventually led to the dogs.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This dribble, I've Had Enough, has the proper formatting and captures the dramatic conclusion of the pillow-talk tale that started on a bed and eventually led to the dogs.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thanks Bill. I enjoyed your fun review.
Wendy
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
Haha! I got to "you don't support me" and knew you were talking about either a mattress or a pillow. Those of us of a certain age are all there with you; in our youth, we could sleep anywhere.
A good dribble for the contest; best of luck.
xo
Pam
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Haha! I got to "you don't support me" and knew you were talking about either a mattress or a pillow. Those of us of a certain age are all there with you; in our youth, we could sleep anywhere.
A good dribble for the contest; best of luck.
xo
Pam
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thanks Pam. I enjoyed your fun review.
Wendy
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I have a pillow that has lost its support system, and yet it is the only one in the house I can rest my head on sleeping on the sofa as I have fo near three years due to a rotor cuff operation (#3).
P.S. - the wife doesn't complain.
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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I have a pillow that has lost its support system, and yet it is the only one in the house I can rest my head on sleeping on the sofa as I have fo near three years due to a rotor cuff operation (#3).
P.S. - the wife doesn't complain.
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Lol. Thank you Tom for your fun review. She doesn?t have to worry about your snoring either!
Wendy
Comment from jmdg1954
Ha, Wendy. You had my head spinning every which way thinking who or what is the culprit ... till I got to the last line.
I liked : you don't support me, your to soft, you're a pain in the neck, can't sleep!
Excellent!! Best of luck in the contest.
John
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Ha, Wendy. You had my head spinning every which way thinking who or what is the culprit ... till I got to the last line.
I liked : you don't support me, your to soft, you're a pain in the neck, can't sleep!
Excellent!! Best of luck in the contest.
John
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Lol. Thanks so much John. I am glad you enjoyed this one!
Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
LOL Wonderful, Wendy! I've fought enough times, punching and fluffing a pillow only to end up with a stiff neck to know exactly where this story is coming from. Thanks for the chuckle. Good one!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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LOL Wonderful, Wendy! I've fought enough times, punching and fluffing a pillow only to end up with a stiff neck to know exactly where this story is coming from. Thanks for the chuckle. Good one!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you Carol. Love your review.
Wendy
Comment from BethShelby
This is a cute flash. I'm glad all those negative words weren'r foe something or someone whose ego could be bruised by them. I've told my mattress rhe same thinfg you've told your pillow.
Beth
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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This is a cute flash. I'm glad all those negative words weren'r foe something or someone whose ego could be bruised by them. I've told my mattress rhe same thinfg you've told your pillow.
Beth
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you Beth for a super review.wendy
Comment from kahpot
Ha! Ha! but seriously pillows are a very important part of our sleep, we spend quite a bit of in bed, love the artwork for this story, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Ha! Ha! but seriously pillows are a very important part of our sleep, we spend quite a bit of in bed, love the artwork for this story, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot
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Comment Written 03-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 03-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Kahpot. I enjoyed your review.
Wendy