The Cougar Hunter
Tracking women of 'a certain age.'33 total reviews
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Rachelle!
Crap!
Out of sixes already!
Your offering is priceless!
Step by step you lure the reader into the web that the narrator has woven for his supposed target: the alluring "cougar," only to realize at the narrative's ending that the entire situation was/ is a set-up by the industrious "Professor Stanton:" "AND WE HAVE LIFT-OFF!" shouts Cleopatra as the co-eds on both sides of the cougar's table begin to whoop and high-five her.
"Awesome work, Professor Stanton!" says a sprite with blue-tipped, waist length hair..."
Erotic? Yes!
But even more so, just downright creative writing with a most delicious ending!
I concur: "Best research field trip EVER!"
Played so well!
Still smiling!
Best wishes!
Fondly,
diane
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Hello, Rachelle!
Crap!
Out of sixes already!
Your offering is priceless!
Step by step you lure the reader into the web that the narrator has woven for his supposed target: the alluring "cougar," only to realize at the narrative's ending that the entire situation was/ is a set-up by the industrious "Professor Stanton:" "AND WE HAVE LIFT-OFF!" shouts Cleopatra as the co-eds on both sides of the cougar's table begin to whoop and high-five her.
"Awesome work, Professor Stanton!" says a sprite with blue-tipped, waist length hair..."
Erotic? Yes!
But even more so, just downright creative writing with a most delicious ending!
I concur: "Best research field trip EVER!"
Played so well!
Still smiling!
Best wishes!
Fondly,
diane
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you very, very much!! I love how in-depth this is. It's always encouraging to read what "landed" with those on the other side of the creation!! xoxo
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL. Rachelle, you have provided a community service by teaching guys how to spot a cougar and attract their attention. But if I need to look for ladies 12 years older, that means my starting point is 90. Umm.
On the other hand this cougar hunter is not likely to show his face in that coffee shop again! Very Clever. Terry.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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LOL. Rachelle, you have provided a community service by teaching guys how to spot a cougar and attract their attention. But if I need to look for ladies 12 years older, that means my starting point is 90. Umm.
On the other hand this cougar hunter is not likely to show his face in that coffee shop again! Very Clever. Terry.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
Definitely NOT!!
Thanks, Terry, for the fun review! xo
Comment from HarryT
Ah, yes, the thrill of the hunt. Hopefully, the prize lives up to anticipation.
Love the emotion building words like languorous, the rasy, lascivious tone, and the work of the tongue licking the cream. Pale pink nipples, she had to be a blonde. I have found the 45 is an ideal cougar age. However, it can very somewhat. Yeah, you got me with this one, you coy lass.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Ah, yes, the thrill of the hunt. Hopefully, the prize lives up to anticipation.
Love the emotion building words like languorous, the rasy, lascivious tone, and the work of the tongue licking the cream. Pale pink nipples, she had to be a blonde. I have found the 45 is an ideal cougar age. However, it can very somewhat. Yeah, you got me with this one, you coy lass.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I'm not a blonde, and I...well, you know...
Thanks for the very lovely review! I appreciate it. xoxo
Comment from juliaSjames
IMO you don't need the warning, it's a tasteful write. But I suppose better safe than sorry.
I enjoyed the story with its surprise ending for the crestfallen (sic) would be Lothario. It's brilliantly written, love the creamy bun analogy and the way he gets carried away with his own fantasies ! LOL
But here's the thing! See, I've always thought of middle aged women as cougars on the hunt for prey, you know. the boy toy situation.
In my big game book, when the man is on the hunt he's usually looking to bag the trophy of wealth etc. Sex is just the necessary means.
So I would see the Professor as dyed hair , plump more than curvaceous, but dressed provocatively and with expensive jewelry. Bit of flab when he imagines undressing her! Maybe that turns him on, the wicked thing!
And hey, thirty nine is way too young nowadays for the jaws of time to start snapping!
Anyway that's my take. Not sure if it will help. And anyway I haven't researched the issue like the Professor's class so it's more than likely I'm plain wrong.
Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Julia
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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IMO you don't need the warning, it's a tasteful write. But I suppose better safe than sorry.
I enjoyed the story with its surprise ending for the crestfallen (sic) would be Lothario. It's brilliantly written, love the creamy bun analogy and the way he gets carried away with his own fantasies ! LOL
But here's the thing! See, I've always thought of middle aged women as cougars on the hunt for prey, you know. the boy toy situation.
In my big game book, when the man is on the hunt he's usually looking to bag the trophy of wealth etc. Sex is just the necessary means.
So I would see the Professor as dyed hair , plump more than curvaceous, but dressed provocatively and with expensive jewelry. Bit of flab when he imagines undressing her! Maybe that turns him on, the wicked thing!
And hey, thirty nine is way too young nowadays for the jaws of time to start snapping!
Anyway that's my take. Not sure if it will help. And anyway I haven't researched the issue like the Professor's class so it's more than likely I'm plain wrong.
Best of luck in the contest
Blessings, Julia
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I see your point. Thank you for those tips very much. I'll give it some thought.
The contest rules stated that we had to list it under Erotica/Adult Content, so I complied.
Thanks for the in-depth review and for catching the "creamy buns." I made myself laugh with that one...and "he yanked himself back to reality." Hahahaha.
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Lololol
Good luck, Rachelle
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Your story is engaging and easy to follow, the kind that readers want to read more. I like the plot and the monologuing is great. Men can be very arrogant and self-serving.
I'm curious to find out what happens next! Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Your story is engaging and easy to follow, the kind that readers want to read more. I like the plot and the monologuing is great. Men can be very arrogant and self-serving.
I'm curious to find out what happens next! Well done.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I think I'll have to leave it to your imagination, Gypsy; I can't imagine a sequel! Thanks for the very encouraging and validating review. xo
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Erotic Writing Contest. This was a fun read. Flirtatious and lightly erotic with a story line that kept me wondering where it was going. The twist ending was enjoyable and unexpected. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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An excellent entry for the Erotic Writing Contest. This was a fun read. Flirtatious and lightly erotic with a story line that kept me wondering where it was going. The twist ending was enjoyable and unexpected. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Of course I love this review!! Thank you for the validation and encouragement. xo
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the hunt and I was there witnessing these looks and gestures Rachelle, you certainly brought the scene and the atmosphere to life and I loved your descriptions and erotic language and your sense of humour at the end, a magical post Rachelle, you revealed a lot here, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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I enjoyed the hunt and I was there witnessing these looks and gestures Rachelle, you certainly brought the scene and the atmosphere to life and I loved your descriptions and erotic language and your sense of humour at the end, a magical post Rachelle, you revealed a lot here, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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This means the world coming from you, Dolly. Thank you for this most validating of reviews!! xoxo
Comment from GWHARGIS
OMG! OMG! OMG! This was probably one of the very best stories I have ever read. The inner monologuing was exquisite. His cockiness and arrogance something I wanted to smack right out of him. But in the end, the hunter became the prey. The professors last comment was perfect. This was so good!!!! Gretchen
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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OMG! OMG! OMG! This was probably one of the very best stories I have ever read. The inner monologuing was exquisite. His cockiness and arrogance something I wanted to smack right out of him. But in the end, the hunter became the prey. The professors last comment was perfect. This was so good!!!! Gretchen
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you!! As the consummate storyteller, your comments mean the world. xo
Comment from judiverse
You must have enrolled in the Lancellot School of Male Psychology. Your young man apparently thinks he's God's gift to women and can pick and choose among them all. Another thing about an older woman--she may also have money, something the younger ones may lack. Apparently, he thinks the younger ones are too easy pickings. I love your ending that this has been a set-up, with the prof being the one who's engineered this scenario. It seems the other girls have been taking notes all along, and apparently it's a class experiment. Love the story, and best of luck in the contest. Compared to some of the stuff that will probably be submitted, I'd say this was pretty tasteful. You didn't resort to the vulgar language some will probably use. judi
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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You must have enrolled in the Lancellot School of Male Psychology. Your young man apparently thinks he's God's gift to women and can pick and choose among them all. Another thing about an older woman--she may also have money, something the younger ones may lack. Apparently, he thinks the younger ones are too easy pickings. I love your ending that this has been a set-up, with the prof being the one who's engineered this scenario. It seems the other girls have been taking notes all along, and apparently it's a class experiment. Love the story, and best of luck in the contest. Compared to some of the stuff that will probably be submitted, I'd say this was pretty tasteful. You didn't resort to the vulgar language some will probably use. judi
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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No, to me, vulgar is the antithesis to sexy. Thanks for this glorious review. I appreciate it so very much. Check out Jessica Wheeler's entry, "I'm Not Me." That's excellent and also not vulgar. xo
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Great story, and good luck in the contest. I enjoyed reading. judi
Comment from Gunner Lil
A very well written short that had this reader wanting more as I smiled at all the key points of 'come hither'.
Great flow and pace.
A joy to read twice.
Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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A very well written short that had this reader wanting more as I smiled at all the key points of 'come hither'.
Great flow and pace.
A joy to read twice.
Thank you for sharing.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you, Gunner Lil! What a wonderful review this is. xo