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Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.

22 total reviews 
Comment from Natureschild
Excellent
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This chapter shed light on Echo's persona while intensifying the clash between Echo and Hades. The vibrant portrayal of characters, captivating setting, and charged dialogue converge to craft an enthralling story. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

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 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Thank you so much for the lovely review, my friend! You did a great job of letting me know the strengths so I can the story.
    Take care,
    Rhonda
Comment from Ulla
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Wow, Rhonda you really write this so very well. Echo will and spirit is amazing and their sparing was wonderful. But can Echo defeat someone like Hades? I'll have to wait and see. Ulla xcx
Ps, I'm so sorry that you and your family have been through a sad time.

 Comment Written 21-Apr-2024


reply by the author on 21-Apr-2024
    Hi Ulla,
    Thank you so much for the brilliant 6 stars! I appreciate your comments as well! I?m certainly not sure Echo can defeat Hades, but perhaps she can resist his wiles! It?s her spirit Hades is drawn to. Will he destroy it?

    Thank you, again, my friend,
    Hugs,
    Rhonda