Song Of The Serenades
eerie melodies of the mountain33 total reviews
Comment from GoWiSt
Very nice complementary picture art choice.
Good imagery, which puts me right in the scene.
"as the wind sang its songs
and skipped and danced" Nice personification of the wind.
Nice romance within.
I'd love to visit these Serenade Mountains one day.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Very nice complementary picture art choice.
Good imagery, which puts me right in the scene.
"as the wind sang its songs
and skipped and danced" Nice personification of the wind.
Nice romance within.
I'd love to visit these Serenade Mountains one day.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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They are in my mind and heart! Thank you so much!
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very, very nice.
Especially the tender parts!
You put me in the Sierras, even though you might have it placed in the Rockies.
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Very, very nice.
Especially the tender parts!
You put me in the Sierras, even though you might have it placed in the Rockies.
Best wishes.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for those kind words!
Comment from Lisasview
Really wonderful to read this work of yours dearest Jim.
I really enjoyed it!!
I have not been posting recently... just so busy with other things.
Lisasview
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Really wonderful to read this work of yours dearest Jim.
I really enjoyed it!!
I have not been posting recently... just so busy with other things.
Lisasview
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I have missed your posting and welcome your kind words!
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I have been so busy?.
Hope to post soon?
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Your words will be so welcome whenever they appear!
Comment from BethShelby
This is a very romantic free verse poem. You actually promoted it well as I not used to seeing some much money on your work. I enjoyed reading you poem about the eerie turns the wind makes as it blows through the Serenade Mountains. I don't know where they are but they sound lovely.
Beth
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is a very romantic free verse poem. You actually promoted it well as I not used to seeing some much money on your work. I enjoyed reading you poem about the eerie turns the wind makes as it blows through the Serenade Mountains. I don't know where they are but they sound lovely.
Beth
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I can't always promote my work, but I needed experience in poetry so I had this one promoted and it got great reception, for which I give God the glory.
Comment from QC Poet
We think that we are alone and hidden from prying eyes but the truth is the sun and moon see all, the wind hears and rain cleanses what we have done in our innocence and youth so only our memories carry and appreciate those songs of our past. Thank you for sharing your poetic memories.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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We think that we are alone and hidden from prying eyes but the truth is the sun and moon see all, the wind hears and rain cleanses what we have done in our innocence and youth so only our memories carry and appreciate those songs of our past. Thank you for sharing your poetic memories.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you for granting me those kind words!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a lovely poem full of colorful descriptions. It evokes vivid visuals in the reader's mind. My favorite lines:
water slithers on downward path
like weary tears
Very much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely poem full of colorful descriptions. It evokes vivid visuals in the reader's mind. My favorite lines:
water slithers on downward path
like weary tears
Very much enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I very much enjoyed and appreciated your kind words!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is absolutely wonderful! I think it's the best thing you've posted so far. WOW!!!! The descriptions are perfect. I felt like I was there feeling the and seeing the melodies of the mountains.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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This is absolutely wonderful! I think it's the best thing you've posted so far. WOW!!!! The descriptions are perfect. I felt like I was there feeling the and seeing the melodies of the mountains.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much! I never felt I was much good at poetry but you and the FS writers have taught me much!
Comment from papa55mike
I've always believed that the energy we leave behind in homes or places remains. Like stories written in the hills. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I've always believed that the energy we leave behind in homes or places remains. Like stories written in the hills. What a wonderfully written poem. Best of luck with your writing!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your wonderful words!
Comment from DeboraDyess
Absolutely beautiful! Your choice of words paint an exquisite picture of both the area nd your love. I hope it's biographical. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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Absolutely beautiful! Your choice of words paint an exquisite picture of both the area nd your love. I hope it's biographical. :)
Blessings and many thanks,
Deb
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2024
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I replied once before but am not sure it ever went through, with my terrible wifi. Thank you so much for your kind words!
Comment from Sally Law
This is quite beautiful, my friend, and gives me a taste of the country I seldom see. I think the last I was there was 2002. I had eyesight then. I played golf in Arizona and Colorado with my husband and his oldest brother. How blessed you are to know it. Thank you so much for sharing.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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This is quite beautiful, my friend, and gives me a taste of the country I seldom see. I think the last I was there was 2002. I had eyesight then. I played golf in Arizona and Colorado with my husband and his oldest brother. How blessed you are to know it. Thank you so much for sharing.
Sending you my best today as always.
Sal xoxo
Comment Written 16-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2024
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Thank you. I still am not that good at poetry. I have learned much from FS. I believe this is the first time I've promoted as poem.