Comment from Kelly Hope

Good

Such a way to word this.
It's so Indirectly powerful.

*hand clap*
Very good job!
Thank you for sharing your poetry to be read. Intriguing and a great read.

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 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

thank you kelly. may i ask why the 4? is it missing something? any suggestions for making it better? :-)

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Your memories are mere ghosts, teachers and the pointer to narrow path, but memories are good, but also bad, but both are therapeutic, one can be a downer, beautifully written, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

lol so true! thank you roy :-)

reply by royowen on 02-Mar-2024

Bless you

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This I s an excellent poem for the challenge. I enjoyed the colorful imagery and descriptions. Your fonts and entire presentation work very well.

Best wishes,

Alex


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 Comment Written 02-Mar-2024

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reply by the author on 02-Mar-2024

thank you alex! :-)