Whispers of Moonlight
a 3-6-9 poetic form40 total reviews
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is a good poem for the challenge. It is good of colorful imagery and some humor. Thank you for sharing this! Many will enjoy it as I did.
Best wishes,
Alex
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This is a good poem for the challenge. It is good of colorful imagery and some humor. Thank you for sharing this! Many will enjoy it as I did.
Best wishes,
Alex
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much, Alex.
Melissa
Comment from mermaids
Love reading your words out loud. Your poetic form is so smooth and gives a silky feel to your poem. There is a fantasy feel to your theme, the moon is alive and whispering, we only have to listen to hear the secrets.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Love reading your words out loud. Your poetic form is so smooth and gives a silky feel to your poem. There is a fantasy feel to your theme, the moon is alive and whispering, we only have to listen to hear the secrets.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hi there!! Thank you for your wonderful comments and review... I must confess that I imagined the moonlight whispering to me and it helped me get the feel for this one. :)
Melissa
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This sounds like a wonderful experience Melissa and you brought a touch of magic to this post, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love the (moonbeam's caress) love Dolly x
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This sounds like a wonderful experience Melissa and you brought a touch of magic to this post, much enjoyed and good luck with the contest, love the (moonbeam's caress) love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you Dolly. I worked on this for four days. My head fog from the flu is slow to leave, but I'm getting there. So appreciate your thoughts on it :)
Melissa
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Thank you Dolly. I worked on this for four days. My head fog from the flu is slow to leave, but I'm getting there. So appreciate your thoughts on it :)
Melissa
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I hope you feel better soon Melissa, I have escaped having a cold this season!!
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a really good 3-6-9 poem, Melissa. You have done well to incorporate rhyme. Great picture to go with the poem. You should do really well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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This is a really good 3-6-9 poem, Melissa. You have done well to incorporate rhyme. Great picture to go with the poem. You should do really well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much Paul. I appreciate your lovely words!!
Melissa
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Thanks so much Paul. I appreciate your lovely words!!
Melissa
Comment from estory
Nicely imagined and composed. There's a hint of magic, here in the moonlight; a sense of the mysterious elements of the universe that surround us, beckon us into the sweet and sublime of the unknown and unknowable. I like the rhythm of the lines gradually opening out; there's a sense of widening horizons, attainable freedom here. estory
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Nicely imagined and composed. There's a hint of magic, here in the moonlight; a sense of the mysterious elements of the universe that surround us, beckon us into the sweet and sublime of the unknown and unknowable. I like the rhythm of the lines gradually opening out; there's a sense of widening horizons, attainable freedom here. estory
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much story!! So glad you enjoyed it.
Melissa
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Thanks so much story!! So glad you enjoyed it.
Melissa
Comment from ImaginosBuzzardoDesdinova
Aye! The moonlight brings forth many tales of yore. And from such tales wisdom dances forth in that moonlight. This was a wonderful poem, speaking such a simple and elegant truth. Keep up the excellent writing.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Aye! The moonlight brings forth many tales of yore. And from such tales wisdom dances forth in that moonlight. This was a wonderful poem, speaking such a simple and elegant truth. Keep up the excellent writing.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much for the lovely review!
Melissa
Comment from John Ciarmello
There are so many beautiful words woven within the tale of the mysterious "Whispers of Moonlight" on a surrounding landscape.
So elegantly done, SUGARRAY77. Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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There are so many beautiful words woven within the tale of the mysterious "Whispers of Moonlight" on a surrounding landscape.
So elegantly done, SUGARRAY77. Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hello John. Thanks for your wonderful review!
Melissa
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Melissa,
This poem personifies the moon well and brings the feeling
of dreaming,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on wining the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hi Melissa,
This poem personifies the moon well and brings the feeling
of dreaming,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Congrats on wining the contest.
Have a great rest of the weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hi Joan. Thanks so much, my friend.
Melissa
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My pleasure,
Melissa.
Joan
Comment from BethShelby
The word you use and descriptive and mysterious. I love that you made this 3-6-9 into a intriguing poem where the three stanzas fit neatly together and rhyme. This should do well in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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The word you use and descriptive and mysterious. I love that you made this 3-6-9 into a intriguing poem where the three stanzas fit neatly together and rhyme. This should do well in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Hi Beth. Thank you for your lovely comments and review.
Melissa
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this 3/6/9 poetry contes Melissa, you aren't capable of writing anything sub standard, in my experience, and this is a great example of that, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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An excellent entry in this 3/6/9 poetry contes Melissa, you aren't capable of writing anything sub standard, in my experience, and this is a great example of that, beautifully written, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much Roy! I appreciate your lovely review and encouragement!
Melissa
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Most welcome