Chair
Free Form Contest27 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
WOW oh WOW!! This contest entry is amazing. It's filled with passion, descriptions and metaphors. Not only that it's not forced it flow like honey off a spoon. Good luck with the contest, but I doubt you need it, you have nailed this one.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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WOW oh WOW!! This contest entry is amazing. It's filled with passion, descriptions and metaphors. Not only that it's not forced it flow like honey off a spoon. Good luck with the contest, but I doubt you need it, you have nailed this one.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Barbara, im so sorry for my delayed response. I appreciate this wonderful review so much!! Thank you!
Xo
Jess
Comment from John Ciarmello
You have met a great poet when she can make the inanimately mundane into beautiful poetry.
In comfort, on edge,
at the mercy of your grip,
clenching and releasing
on a whim.
So engaging, Jess! Best, JohnC
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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You have met a great poet when she can make the inanimately mundane into beautiful poetry.
In comfort, on edge,
at the mercy of your grip,
clenching and releasing
on a whim.
So engaging, Jess! Best, JohnC
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2024
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Thank you so much, John!
Xo
Jess
Comment from patcelaw
I think there are many times in our lives when we feel like we're hung on an empty chair from high over a canyon somewhere. I enjoyed your free verse very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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I think there are many times in our lives when we feel like we're hung on an empty chair from high over a canyon somewhere. I enjoyed your free verse very much and I wish you the very best with all of your writing. Patricia.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank-you so much, Patricia!! Xoxo
Comment from royowen
Well I like the poetic devices you use Jessica. I love that first metaphor, to rest in the hammock of your palm suspended over a canyon, very good my friend, beautifully written my friend good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Well I like the poetic devices you use Jessica. I love that first metaphor, to rest in the hammock of your palm suspended over a canyon, very good my friend, beautifully written my friend good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Roy, I apologize for my delayed response. I am just catching up. Thank you so much for your wonderful comment!
Jess
Xo
Jess
Comment from Julie Helms
You use striking imagery and metaphors to describe what you're feeling. It seems as if you are chained to or beholden to a person that is not there, yet whose presence you still feel powerfully in their absence.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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You use striking imagery and metaphors to describe what you're feeling. It seems as if you are chained to or beholden to a person that is not there, yet whose presence you still feel powerfully in their absence.
Thanks for sharing! Julie
Comment Written 10-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thank you, Julie! Still catching up! lol
Xo
Jessica
Comment from Alexandra Trovato
This is an excellent poem for the challenge! You use good descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your emotional words and supporting image support your poem. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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This is an excellent poem for the challenge! You use good descriptive words and colorful imagery. Your emotional words and supporting image support your poem. I enjoyed reviewing this. Thank you for sharing it.
Best wishes,
Alex
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2024
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Thanks so much, Alex!!
Comment from Douglas Goff
I have never found myself owning to someone in this way. I have always had an inner strength that maintains my core.
Great line:
My eyes drawn
to the sting
of your cold, bent air.
Great fun read.
D
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I have never found myself owning to someone in this way. I have always had an inner strength that maintains my core.
Great line:
My eyes drawn
to the sting
of your cold, bent air.
Great fun read.
D
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2024