Jonathan's Story
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "A Sense of Belonging"Our fostering journey with a severely disabled boy
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Comment from Tom Horonzy
We could not possibly have imagined what happened next .... was more than true, but we, your readers, will have to wait and see what you have to write next.
You continue to amaze.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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We could not possibly have imagined what happened next .... was more than true, but we, your readers, will have to wait and see what you have to write next.
You continue to amaze.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you Tom. And you continue to be a great support and encouragement.
Wendy
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Very well done. Nice segment to yours and Jonathon's story.
The picture is Jonathon's mother?
Who knew how he would become linked with us, further down the track? - I think I would omit this comma.
Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Very well done. Nice segment to yours and Jonathon's story.
The picture is Jonathon's mother?
Who knew how he would become linked with us, further down the track? - I think I would omit this comma.
Best wishes.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you Wayne, Yes, I think you are right, I will edit it. No it's not his mother but I didn't have one of her handy so I just used this one. There are some similarities though.
Wendy
Comment from Sarah Tummey
Hi, Wendy. I loved the last sentence, as I think it would make people want to keep reading. So many books, you put down at the end of a chapter and take awhile to pick them up again.
It was also interesting to read about Jonathan's birth family and the growth in your relationship with Sheryl.
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Hi, Wendy. I loved the last sentence, as I think it would make people want to keep reading. So many books, you put down at the end of a chapter and take awhile to pick them up again.
It was also interesting to read about Jonathan's birth family and the growth in your relationship with Sheryl.
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2024
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Thank you very much Sarah. The next part was quite shocking. I am so glad you are enjoying these stories.
Wendy