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Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Begin Again
Good morning and thank you for blessing me with your magical and entertaining story. I was afraid since I've jumped in quite late, I would be confused. Instead I found myself smiling and enjoying every magical word, especially the food fight. LOL And the Summary at the bottom helped me catch up quickly. Thank you!
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 04-Feb-2024
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
Hi Carol, thank you so much for the 6 stars, and for the wonderful comments!! And, I'm so glad you've joined in!!
It's funny, but I just updated the summary after falling behind. I'm glad now I did.
I'm glad the foodfight scene worked. I hesitated to put it in, but I'm about to get to more intense scenes and wanted something that could break the ice for them quickly.
Thanks again,
Hugs,
Rhonda
reply by Begin Again on 04-Feb-2024
It was a joy to read! Took me away from the drama approaching in my story. Smiles and hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2024
Ahhh, I look forward to your next chapter!!
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