Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

A humorous poem for sure. I'm sure that the descriptions of this fellow are worth a grin. It's difficult to write a poem about a close-up picture. Usually when they are close you see every detail there is~

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words. I'm happy you like it. Good night... or day.

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Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol! Well, we love our loved ones no matter what their personal quirks are and even put up with all the snoring. Eventually, we become deaf enough so we can sleep!

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

LoL it's so dumb but I'm making people laugh so that's good enough for me. True love is loving everything about him or her. Maybe one day I will have that.

Thank you, sis.

Love you

Marival

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

I was about to spit out my wine when I read the line about ways to kill him in his sleep. Could it be his snoring? This was a humorous look at love. Very real. Gretchen

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 Comment Written 10-Dec-2023

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reply by the author on 11-Dec-2023

Yeah, she is not going to kill him but sometimes crosses her mind. LoL I'm glad I made you laugh. Thank you. Gretchen (*÷*)

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