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Thanksgiving Football

Fun while it lasted

26 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A lovely celebratory post for Thanksgiving (sadly, we don't have this event). I enjoyed hearing about those fun 6 seasons you had when the kids knocked a football around and, of course, accompanied their play with delicious food and drink. To put this into context with a back story about NFL was also very interesting, especially as my knowledge isn't great on the subject. I wondered if it should read: "hosted by a different parent (on) their front lawn..?" All an excellent read, as ever. Thanks John. Happy Thanksgiving! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    I was trying to join parents and lawn together as one. I took your suggestion and made the change.

    Thank yiu, Debbie for reading and another great review.

    John
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Your story is engaging and the plot is easy to follow. I have never been into sports but my family follows the San Francisco 48ers and holiday games. They are watching today. It's a tradition.

Happy Thanksgiving!

Well done.

Gypsy

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Gypsy.
    I always appreciate your reviews.
    John
Comment from lancellot
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Family traditions are nice. Professional traditions are good too, and watching the NFL on Thanksgiving, usually the Bears for the Cowboys has been a staple in America.

Nice work and have a good one too.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    Cowboys looked good today.

    Thank you for the kind review and generous stars.
    John
Comment from Goodadvicechan
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Everyday is a learning day. Thanks for sharing the NFL journey.

I had no idea they went through a long struggle of various hardship times

Thank you for sharing their history with us.


I only know of their glory.

 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    Thank you so much for a fine review and generous stars.

    John
Comment from BethShelby
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This was interesting information on how the NFL got it's start and how some of other would-be leagues didn't make it.The front yard football with the neighborhood kids sounds like a world of fun. Those are memories non of them will ever forget. I hope you have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Whether or not the food is the traditional American fare for the day or the Italian version, I'm sure it will be delicious.

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    Traditional turkey dinner with alllllll the sides.
    I hope you enjoyed yours as well,
    John
reply by BethShelby on 24-Nov-2023
    Actually no one in my family wanted to cook so we went to a nice Italian restaurant. The food was greatl
Comment from royowen
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Our Aussie style footy has evolved in pretty well the same way as yours, although the ratification of the sport took shape in about 1850, and their was a league of teams in about 1860, our game is a cross between rugby and Gaelic football, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : My daughter(')s best friend.

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 Comment Written 23-Nov-2023


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2023
    Thank you, Roy. I appreciate your review, the correction and generous stars.

    John
reply by royowen on 24-Nov-2023
    Most welcome