Comment from Norm Valentine

Excellent

Very nice and to the point. That very poignant single moment when we understand the storm is over as God's sign to Noah showed that longer storm was over.

Also, there appears to be a hint of the "s" letter alliteration scattered throughout. Intentional or not?

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Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

I care not what this style of poetry this is called as it is such a beautiful poem!! I love this description of a rainbow,
"the colorful bridge
sweeps across the sky
where rain and sun meet"
Rainbows are one of nature's most beautiful sights!! Gorgeous!

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Wendy!! Xo

Comment from jim vecchio

Excellent

This has nothing to do with you or your beautiful work, but please check your notes under the post. There are all kinds of letters and punctuation marks tht don't belong there. This happens to my posts and many others. There is some kind of glitch in the system.

 Comment Written 14-Nov-2023

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thanks so much, Jim. It's frustrating, I can't seem to figure out how to stop that.

reply by jim vecchio on 14-Nov-2023

I have to keep erasing and rewriting. Yes, it's frustrating. Especially when you have a quality work like yours!

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

:) xo

reply by jim vecchio on 14-Nov-2023

Have a Blessed Day!

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

This is excellent work for the challenge. Your presentation is very good. You use expressive words and colorful imagery that will draw in readers. I enjoyed reviewing this.

Best wishes,

Alex

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you very much, Alex!

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

There are a lot of odd symbols in the author's notes

Love the title. The poem itself is very artistic and expressive which is quit the accomplishment with so few words.

Well done.
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thanks so much, Douglas. I can't seem to figure out how to prevent these symbols from happening! I will fix. Thanks again!

reply by Douglas Goff on 14-Nov-2023

Happens to everyone. Some kind of system
Issue. Rather annoying isn?t it?

reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

lol, it?s super annoying!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

There's no doubting the picture that's evoked. With scents and light and colour, that beautiful rainbow frames the painting powerfully and magically. Thanks for sharing, Jess. Debbie

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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2023

Thank you so much, Debbie! Xoxo