2023 Gypsy's Haiku
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Comment from lyenochka
I like how the "sunny side up" eggs reflect the sunrise. That gives it a very hopeful feeling for the new day.
I wondered if it should say "on the terrace" - prepositions are so different in English.
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reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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I like how the "sunny side up" eggs reflect the sunrise. That gives it a very hopeful feeling for the new day.
I wondered if it should say "on the terrace" - prepositions are so different in English.
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Comment Written 25-Oct-2023
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2023
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I was not sure. I searched on Google. Thank you very much, big sister. I'll fix it.
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Marival