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Guided by Faith

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Can faith guide our path?

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Comment from GWHARGIS
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Now I can't wait for the teen group to do something like whitewater rafting. I see the potential for Emma and Seth out in the elements. Very cool chapter. That Peggy Barton just won't go away, will she? This was great. Gretchen

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
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This brought back memories of when I was a youth director for our church in Connecticut - we did a lot of the same activities and fundraisers. Car washes and wrapping gifts at Christmas were popular fundraisers, as well. I found the vast majority of kids I worked with to be kind and willing to have "clean fun". I learned a lot from them.

Well, Seth thwarted Peggy's attempts this time, but I'm willing to bet she's going to continue to be a problem.

Glad you enjoyed your vacation and time away. Have a great week.

xo
Pam

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I am glad that Seth is confident enough to handle this situation and Peggy seems to still be a threat, I like how the romance is progressing Barbara, a fine chapter, entertaining and readable, much enjoyed, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 02-Oct-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 02-Oct-2023
    You are most welcome Barbara x
Comment from nomi338
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I love how Seth deals with Peggy Barton, shutting her down as soon as she tries something. I have had a similar problem with a woman who was a friend of my oldest daughter. She had the nerve to tell me that she always wanted to have sex with me. She even stole the photos of my wedding from the album.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    WOW!!! Some women are brazen little huzzies. Thank you for the kind review.
reply by nomi338 on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you. iI has been about 30 years and she is still a threat.
Comment from damommy
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Another great chapter. I love the way the romance is progressing. i still worry about Peggy. I don't think she's through making trouble just yet.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Peggy still has a few things up her sleeve. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Barbara, welcome back from your holiday. I hope you had a great time. I.liked the way Seth brushed off ms Barton.
Emma's class went really well and Seth wants to join. Now onto dinner. Ulla xcx

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Hope you had a nice vacation. And I hope you're glad to be home and with your FanStory buddies. I'm sure they've all missed having you around to entertain them. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Yes, I am happy to be home and I did miss my FanStory family. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Jay Squires
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Fun chapter with a glimpse into the way Emma and Seth relate to a much younger crowd. Just a couple of things:

He noticed a tumbled free-standing chart. [Barbara, what does this mean? Had the chart collapsed? I thought that "tumbled" had a meaning I wasn't aware of.]

She relayed part her graduation party story [relayed part OF (?) her graduation party story]

Their friendship's coming along nicely. LOL

Jay




 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    I met tumbled as fallen. Maybe I need to use that word. I'll change it as I add the other word. Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help.
Comment from Daylily
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You have presented an excellent explanation of what the Apostles Creed is saying. The chapter goes on to support having a strong and heartfelt faith. I also like that a romance appears to be developing. The YouTube song added at the bottom is very fitting.

 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.
Comment from Paul McFarland
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The story is moving along very nicely, Barb. I was a little worried about what was going to happen with Peggy, but you took care of that problem. We must be getting close to some romance.

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 Comment Written 01-Oct-2023


reply by the author on 01-Oct-2023
    We are. I promise you romance. Seth and Emma are getting closer, but still have a few issues to take care of. Thank you for the kind review.