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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Reckoning"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from lyenochka
Oh no! What a day for Echo. But we're missing all that Bessie told Echo. Or did I miss a chapter? I'll check.
I like how your characters behave predictably like Sara Beth. I guess the eye color is critical information. This Officer Bradley could be the serial killer. Now that everyone has seen the pictures, they are all edgy with the threat to Echo's life.
"They're sending an office over," (officer?)
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Oh no! What a day for Echo. But we're missing all that Bessie told Echo. Or did I miss a chapter? I'll check.
I like how your characters behave predictably like Sara Beth. I guess the eye color is critical information. This Officer Bradley could be the serial killer. Now that everyone has seen the pictures, they are all edgy with the threat to Echo's life.
"They're sending an office over," (officer?)
Comment Written 24-Sep-2023
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2023
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Hi Helen, thank you for the lovely 6 stars. I so appreciate it!
Yes, you did miss a chapter. It was published before I was ready. I didn?t know it was set on no for keeping it private. I had to pull it out, then repost later. I?m not sure it went to people?s boxes.
Thanks for stopping by on this one.
Hugs,
Rhonda