River run
Part of God's beauty.40 total reviews
Comment from Wendyanne
This sounds like a wonderful dream and you have described it vividly descriptively, ie,
"On the riverbank
Where wild flowers grow,
The river runs deep
And the waters run slow."
The poem runs smoothly like the river.
  |
This sounds like a wonderful dream and you have described it vividly descriptively, ie,
"On the riverbank
Where wild flowers grow,
The river runs deep
And the waters run slow."
The poem runs smoothly like the river.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Jacob1395
This is a really beautiful piece of writing that really drew me in. There are certainly some dreams I've had, I can think of, that I wish were real. Sometimes they feel so real. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.
|
This is a really beautiful piece of writing that really drew me in. There are certainly some dreams I've had, I can think of, that I wish were real. Sometimes they feel so real. An excellent piece, I really enjoyed it.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Lisasview
We all need to make our dreams come true... That is the adventure of a happy life.
There of course are bad times along with the good but working through them is what counts.
I really like the handwriting font you used and the color...very nice poem Willie,
Lisasview
|
We all need to make our dreams come true... That is the adventure of a happy life.
There of course are bad times along with the good but working through them is what counts.
I really like the handwriting font you used and the color...very nice poem Willie,
Lisasview
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Michele Harber
I can fully understand why you'd dream of a beautiful image like that. You describe the scene in such lovely detail that I was surprised it was a dream, not a description of a scene you were actually viewing at the moment. The simplicity of the rhymes works well with the innocent awe the poem expresses.
|
I can fully understand why you'd dream of a beautiful image like that. You describe the scene in such lovely detail that I was surprised it was a dream, not a description of a scene you were actually viewing at the moment. The simplicity of the rhymes works well with the innocent awe the poem expresses.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from karenina
I was listening to vintage John Denver today, and your poem is every bit as lyrical and in tune with nature as were his songs...
You sum up how much this dream affects you in your final stanza, which leads me to quote J. Denver...
"You fill up my senses!"
Karenina
|
I was listening to vintage John Denver today, and your poem is every bit as lyrical and in tune with nature as were his songs...
You sum up how much this dream affects you in your final stanza, which leads me to quote J. Denver...
"You fill up my senses!"
Karenina
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Ben Colder
The beauty of God and His splendor is beyond words of description. The touch of love
, Himself can been seen and felt through everything.
Well done with this nice poem.
 |
The beauty of God and His splendor is beyond words of description. The touch of love
, Himself can been seen and felt through everything.
Well done with this nice poem.
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Well, Willy, that photo certainly looks like a dream. So beautiful. Your script was well- placed and adds impact to your wonderfully poetic words.
Great job here.
D
|
Well, Willy, that photo certainly looks like a dream. So beautiful. Your script was well- placed and adds impact to your wonderfully poetic words.
Great job here.
D
Comment Written 29-Nov-2023
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is pretty good, Willie, until the last stanza. his stanza reads a little awkward. I'll bet you could clean this up. You have a mixed meter in the first four stanzas, but it reads very smoothly. The meter is the problem in the last stanza.
|
This is pretty good, Willie, until the last stanza. his stanza reads a little awkward. I'll bet you could clean this up. You have a mixed meter in the first four stanzas, but it reads very smoothly. The meter is the problem in the last stanza.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
Comment from Daylily
I love to be near any kind of water. Your imagery of flowers on a riverbank is beautiful. Your abcb verses flow well and offer a good feeling to readers. I would like to have a dream like this!
|
I love to be near any kind of water. Your imagery of flowers on a riverbank is beautiful. Your abcb verses flow well and offer a good feeling to readers. I would like to have a dream like this!
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023
Comment from Barry Penfold
A really nice poem. Makes me feel good and the image is delightful. Good rhyming and like the river it has a nice flow. Well done and take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
|
A really nice poem. Makes me feel good and the image is delightful. Good rhyming and like the river it has a nice flow. Well done and take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold
Comment Written 28-Nov-2023