Coffee With Iris
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Comment from Lea Tonin1
I really like it. I think it's great that maybe laugh too. Even though even though even in the face of coming death, it gave me a chuckle!
You wrote this in such a way as to make it incredibly believable. Because people do talk like that. I see, no issues with grammar, punctuation and structure spelling subject matter. It's also aesthetically pleasing. A really great short one as you mentioned but also really good, so thank you for this submission. I hope you have the most awesome evening!
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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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I really like it. I think it's great that maybe laugh too. Even though even though even in the face of coming death, it gave me a chuckle!
You wrote this in such a way as to make it incredibly believable. Because people do talk like that. I see, no issues with grammar, punctuation and structure spelling subject matter. It's also aesthetically pleasing. A really great short one as you mentioned but also really good, so thank you for this submission. I hope you have the most awesome evening!
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Comment Written 29-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Lea. I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Gretchen