Return To Concorde Valley
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "Super Handyman Opening"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from forestport12
Never fall for the kind eyes of a serial killer. You did good to built suspense or tension wanting to know what might happen, and is our character getting a little too close for comfort. Vivid descriptions of the mood and moment of the day too. "Carry on MY wayward woman there will be peace when you are done." From the song by Kansas in the seventies. Lol. Blessings ahead.
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reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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Never fall for the kind eyes of a serial killer. You did good to built suspense or tension wanting to know what might happen, and is our character getting a little too close for comfort. Vivid descriptions of the mood and moment of the day too. "Carry on MY wayward woman there will be peace when you are done." From the song by Kansas in the seventies. Lol. Blessings ahead.
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Comment Written 30-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2023
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That is so funny, yes the kind eyes, though I'm not sure how kind his will be.
She is getting a little too close for comfort with the stranger.
Thanks for your comments on the emotions and mood. I was trying to build that up a bit for this chapter.
Love the song lyrics!!
Blessings for you as well,
Rhonda