I Love You More
A Merry~go~Rhyme for my Granddaughter, Artist, Kenzie Jo41 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
Loved this and once more I learn of a completely new form of poetry to me! I also love the way you "immortalize" those you love in your poetry. The font and background color complimented your words.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Loved this and once more I learn of a completely new form of poetry to me! I also love the way you "immortalize" those you love in your poetry. The font and background color complimented your words.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks JIm, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
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And I very much appreciate your works.
Comment from royowen
Because I write a poem for my kids, my grands, and my wife, every birthday, it's so good to have the privilege to be able to do this, I know that you find the same thing with yours, well done dear girl, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Because I write a poem for my kids, my grands, and my wife, every birthday, it's so good to have the privilege to be able to do this, I know that you find the same thing with yours, well done dear girl, beautifully written Debi, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Roy, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend. Send me your email and I will show you what I did with poems that I did for everyone in my entire family before I joined FS. It turned out pretty cool. It could be a joint project for you and your lovely wife.
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I?ve been writing birthday poems and mothers/valentine poems for thirty years, for the grandkids since they were conceived Debi, my email. e.rowen@hotmail.com
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Lol, just something I did for my family that they truly loved and I would be proud to show you. Thanks for your email Roy. Then you will have mine too.
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Well done
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You?re a brilliant human being, God is proud of you
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Kenzie Jo with us. Yes, those sweet little text messages from our grandchildren are the most precious gifts of all. My heart melts when I get them. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute to Kenzie Jo with us. Yes, those sweet little text messages from our grandchildren are the most precious gifts of all. My heart melts when I get them. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Barb, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
Comment from Verna Cole Mitchell
This is a great birthday poem for your granddaughter-so sweet! My mother always closed our phone conversations with--I love you more. I have 4 grandchildren--all married, plus their spouses and my 6 great grandchildren. Lots of birthdays to think about! With my son and daughter and their mates, that's 18! Whew! God is good! Love, Verna
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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This is a great birthday poem for your granddaughter-so sweet! My mother always closed our phone conversations with--I love you more. I have 4 grandchildren--all married, plus their spouses and my 6 great grandchildren. Lots of birthdays to think about! With my son and daughter and their mates, that's 18! Whew! God is good! Love, Verna
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Verna, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
Send me your email and I will show you what I did for my family before I joined FS. It will keep grandma Debi alive, for generations to come.
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lmitchell15@carolina.rr.com sent with love! Verna
Comment from LateBloomer
Hi Debi, this poem is so heartfelt. Your love shines through the years and upon Kenzi and the beautiful woman that she has become. She has so much talent. All of FS can attest to that. Her art has the finest
references--more than she ever thought. So, let me join the global
FS family and wish Kenzie the happiest, best 20th birthday ever. She is a woman, a daughter, and a granddaughter to be proud of.
I especially liked:
How beautiful you have become
Your soul is sweet and kind
Your C r e a t i v i t y is from
Your talent and your mind
(The above words are so true. I liked how you creatively spaced out the word "Creativity." Either you take after Kenzie or she takes after you. Either way, it's a win-win.)
This is a birthday poem that anyone would love to have, but I'm sure that Kenzie will be over the moon to receive it.
Well done. Smooth rhyming. A pleasure to read. Happy Birthday Kenzie.
You're the best! Xo. Margaret
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Hi Debi, this poem is so heartfelt. Your love shines through the years and upon Kenzi and the beautiful woman that she has become. She has so much talent. All of FS can attest to that. Her art has the finest
references--more than she ever thought. So, let me join the global
FS family and wish Kenzie the happiest, best 20th birthday ever. She is a woman, a daughter, and a granddaughter to be proud of.
I especially liked:
How beautiful you have become
Your soul is sweet and kind
Your C r e a t i v i t y is from
Your talent and your mind
(The above words are so true. I liked how you creatively spaced out the word "Creativity." Either you take after Kenzie or she takes after you. Either way, it's a win-win.)
This is a birthday poem that anyone would love to have, but I'm sure that Kenzie will be over the moon to receive it.
Well done. Smooth rhyming. A pleasure to read. Happy Birthday Kenzie.
You're the best! Xo. Margaret
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Sweetie. You will never guess where I am right now. It is almost 1 am and I am sitting down my basement because the weather turned so bad, so I brought the iPad down to keep an eye on the weather and do a few thank you messages. So thank you for the awesome review and comments for my sweet Kenz and her poem. Also for the generous stars. Means a lot to me. Thanks again, sis.
Comment from Carol Clark2
What a sweet poem for your beautiful granddaughter, Kenzie. It's a joy to read all the love between the two of you. She's a lucky girl to have such a wonderful grandmother who loves her so dearly. I like how you used 'love you more' throughout the poem. Blessings, and a happy birthday to Kenzie. Carol
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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What a sweet poem for your beautiful granddaughter, Kenzie. It's a joy to read all the love between the two of you. She's a lucky girl to have such a wonderful grandmother who loves her so dearly. I like how you used 'love you more' throughout the poem. Blessings, and a happy birthday to Kenzie. Carol
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2023
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Oh. Carol, thanks so much for this absolutely lovely review and words for my Kenzie and her poem. And I thank you too, for the the six stars. I am Always so honored by those.
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You're welcome. Lovely poem!
Comment from aryr
What a beautiful young lady, Debi. This was a fine thank you for her living and a wonderful tribute to a great being. Not that all of your sons and daughters are great. Not that all of your grandchildren are important, they are! They are great. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Bright blessings n hugs!!!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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What a beautiful young lady, Debi. This was a fine thank you for her living and a wonderful tribute to a great being. Not that all of your sons and daughters are great. Not that all of your grandchildren are important, they are! They are great. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Bright blessings n hugs!!!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Ali, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
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You are so very welcome, Debi.
Comment from nomi338
How sweet. It must be great to not only have a beautifully stunning grand child who clearly adores you, but is wise and loving enough to return the love without prompting. She is clearly a treasure, and the both of you are blessed by the mutual outpouring of affection you both share.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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How sweet. It must be great to not only have a beautifully stunning grand child who clearly adores you, but is wise and loving enough to return the love without prompting. She is clearly a treasure, and the both of you are blessed by the mutual outpouring of affection you both share.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks Nomi. for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear bro!
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It was an enjoyable read.
Comment from JSD
The form is fun and matches the subject, along with the sunny photograph. A sweet and heartfelt poem. Well done and thank you for sharing this.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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The form is fun and matches the subject, along with the sunny photograph. A sweet and heartfelt poem. Well done and thank you for sharing this.
John
"Poetry is the space between words."
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks John, for the very sweet comments for Kenzie and her poem. You are so kind as always and I appreciate them so very much, dear friend.
Comment from Terry Broxson
Kenzie looks like her grandmother. She also appears to be an artist too. Maybe she will become an artist of the written word someday. Your poem is beautifully written from the heart, like all your work. Outstanding. Terry.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Kenzie looks like her grandmother. She also appears to be an artist too. Maybe she will become an artist of the written word someday. Your poem is beautifully written from the heart, like all your work. Outstanding. Terry.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much Terry.
Kenzie and I both thank you for all of your kind words for her and her poem. Grandma even appreciates you thinking that we resemble each other. Lol.
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And thanks for those sweet six stars! So much appreciated!