Grasping the Elusive Dream
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Comment from patcelaw
Hey, seems like those kids that are very creative. Also get into trouble healthwise at times my oldest daughter is very intelligent and she would jump on the bed and she fell off a couple times and broke her collarbone within a matter of about 16 weeks. She had two different times are breaking her collarbone. I wondered if I was gonna have to keep her in a harness from the best hooker from the Seale until she got grown up I didn't know. I enjoyed your story about Dan and I am glad that he has used his abilities for something more useful in these days. I enjoyed your story very much.
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Hey, seems like those kids that are very creative. Also get into trouble healthwise at times my oldest daughter is very intelligent and she would jump on the bed and she fell off a couple times and broke her collarbone within a matter of about 16 weeks. She had two different times are breaking her collarbone. I wondered if I was gonna have to keep her in a harness from the best hooker from the Seale until she got grown up I didn't know. I enjoyed your story about Dan and I am glad that he has used his abilities for something more useful in these days. I enjoyed your story very much.
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you, Patricia. I'm so glad you liked my story. Carol my oldest daughter was born with a broken colarbone but it healed and I wouldn't have known it was broken if the doctor hadn't told me. It is probably more serious after they are older.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
You could write a book solely about Don, Beth! What a wonderful, adventurous, creative and mischievous child he was! Your children are turning out to be such characters and your family life ever eventful! I honestly didn't find any errors (although it is a bit late here so yours is my last review). Your story-telling is, as ever, well expressed and thoroughly enjoyable. Well done and night-night:)) Debbie
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reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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You could write a book solely about Don, Beth! What a wonderful, adventurous, creative and mischievous child he was! Your children are turning out to be such characters and your family life ever eventful! I honestly didn't find any errors (although it is a bit late here so yours is my last review). Your story-telling is, as ever, well expressed and thoroughly enjoyable. Well done and night-night:)) Debbie
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Comment Written 13-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
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Thank you so much Debbie. I'm so pleased you enjoyed my story. All my children were interesting in their unique way. I say I hope you slept well because you want see this until tomorrow.
Beth