Return To Concorde Valley
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Respite from Despair"Fantasy based on the intersection of two worlds.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed this addition to the previous post. I am pretty sure Theo, although mysterious, is going to be very important in Echo's life. I like the innocents of this story and the characters.
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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I enjoyed this addition to the previous post. I am pretty sure Theo, although mysterious, is going to be very important in Echo's life. I like the innocents of this story and the characters.
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and comments, Barbara! I think I was reviewing yours about the same time you were reviewing mine!! Too funny.
I do appreciate you taking the time to review and comments, my friend.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A finely and flawlessly written chapter concentrating on these two characters in the forest. Echo is still clearly traumatised by the fire but increasingly she starts to feel safer in Theo's company though her curiosity about him remains and despite her questions, his mystery continues to perplex both her and the reader. Well done for sharing this intriguing write brought alive by good dialogue and pace of story. Debbie
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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A finely and flawlessly written chapter concentrating on these two characters in the forest. Echo is still clearly traumatised by the fire but increasingly she starts to feel safer in Theo's company though her curiosity about him remains and despite her questions, his mystery continues to perplex both her and the reader. Well done for sharing this intriguing write brought alive by good dialogue and pace of story. Debbie
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2023
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Debbie, thank you so very much. I appreciate the way you have taken time to be specific on your thoughts. That is so helpful when deciding whether something is perceived the way you intended, and it was. You were spot on!
Thank you again,
Rhonda